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For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-forces-interfelfb-04 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2016-05-31 IETF LC End Date: 2016-06-22 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Almost Ready Major Concerns: In Section 5.2, the document says: o The Ethernet type is used to identify the frame as inter-FE LFB type. Ethertype 0xFEFE is to be used (XXX: Note to editor, likely we wont get that value - update when available). There is a process for getting an ethertype assigned. It is handled by the IESG. Please see: http://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/ethertypes.html Minor Concerns: In Section 1.2: s/document reiterates the terminology defined/ /document depends on the terminology defined/ In Section 2: s/The current ForCES model/The ForCES model/ Nits: Many places: s/IPV4/IPv4/ In Section 2: s/architecture calls out for/architecture calls for/ In Section 3.1, why are the paragraphs in bullets? They see to work just fine as normal paragraphs. In Section 5.2: s/header illustrated in Figure 6)/ /header (illustrated in Figure 6) _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
