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For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-alto-deployments-15.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2016-06-13 IETF LC End Date: 2016-06-21 IESG Telechat date: 2016-06-30 Summary: Ready -------- Comment: -------- This is a long document but well written, so there is little to say about it. Minor issues: ------------- The Conclusion section could be deleted. It doesn't add anything. There are a lot of Informational references that are still personal I-Ds. Many of them are not even listed as "Related Internet-Drafts" for the Alto WG. I think readers of the future RFC will find this a bit annoying. Nits: ----- <[email protected]> and <[email protected]> bounced _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
