Sorry it’s late here… > Am 30.06.2016 um 00:23 schrieb Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF) <[email protected]>: > > Hi Brian, hi Jari, > > I’ve put updating Martin’s affliction incl. email address as well as removing > the conclusion already in the RFC editor (in case we don’t do another update > before publication). > > I note your concerns about the references to individual drafst, however, not > sure how this fix this.
s/darfst/drafts/ and s/how this fix this/how to fix this/ > > Thanks! > Mirja > > >> Am 30.06.2016 um 00:19 schrieb Jari Arkko <[email protected]>: >> >> Thanks much, Brian! >> >> Authors, do note Brian’s comments. >> >> Jari >> >> On 24 Jun 2016, at 05:48, Brian E Carpenter <[email protected]> >> wrote: >> >>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >>> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your >>> document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. >>> >>> For more information, please see the FAQ at >>> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >>> >>> Document: draft-ietf-alto-deployments-15.txt >>> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter >>> Review Date: 2016-06-13 >>> IETF LC End Date: 2016-06-21 >>> IESG Telechat date: 2016-06-30 >>> >>> Summary: Ready >>> -------- >>> >>> Comment: >>> -------- >>> >>> This is a long document but well written, so there is little to say about >>> it. >>> >>> Minor issues: >>> ------------- >>> >>> The Conclusion section could be deleted. It doesn't add anything. >>> >>> There are a lot of Informational references that are still personal I-Ds. >>> Many of >>> them are not even listed as "Related Internet-Drafts" for the Alto WG. I >>> think readers >>> of the future RFC will find this a bit annoying. >>> >>> Nits: >>> ----- >>> >>> <[email protected]> and <[email protected]> bounced >>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> Gen-art mailing list >>> [email protected] >>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art >> > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
