Hi Jari, I have (belatedly) responded to Matt's comments which were on draft-25. A lot of his points were made by other reviewers and many have been addressed in draft-26 already.
The IANA reviewer gave us good direction to the correct registration entries/format/detail, and I hope we have got them right in the latest draft. Regards, Rick Taylor > -----Original Message----- > From: Jari Arkko [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: 15 December 2016 09:09 > To: Matt Miller > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Last Call Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-25 > > Matt, > > Many thanks for this. > > Authors, did you have any responses on Matt's comments? > > Also, Matt, I had one question for you: > > > > > * The IANA registries this document establishes are not defined. > > One can deduce the required information and its format, but there is > > no guidance on review process (for example). I urge the authors to > > consult RFC 5226 when revisiting the IANA considerations. > > What did you have in mind here? At least the -26 specifies Specification > Required for the registries, and given RFC 5226's guidance on what that > means, I'm not sure what information is missing. Unless, of course, you think > that there should further expert review guidance. Or is the problem that the > allocation policy is in the table, not in the text, e.g.: > > > 13.6. DLEP Extensions Registrations > > > > > > Upon approval of this document, IANA is requested to create a new > > DLEP registry, named "Extension Type Values". > > > > The following table provides initial registry values and the > > [RFC5226] defined policies that should apply to the registry: > > > > +--------------+----------------------------+ > > | Code | Description/Policy | > > +--------------+----------------------------+ > > | 0 | Reserved | > > | 1 | Credit Windowing [CREDIT] | > > | 2-65519 | Specification Required | > > | 65520-65534 | Private Use | > > | 65535 | Reserved | > > +--------------+----------------------------+ > > > > Table 3: DLEP Extension types > > > > > > > Jari > > > This mail has originated outside your organization, either from an external > partner or the Global Internet. > Keep this in mind if you answer this message. > The information contained within this e-mail and any files attached to this e-mail is private and in addition may include commercially sensitive information. The contents of this e-mail are for the intended recipient only and therefore if you wish to disclose the information contained within this e-mail or attached files, please contact the sender prior to any such disclosure. If you are not the intended recipient, any disclosure, copying or distribution is prohibited. Please also contact the sender and inform them of the error and delete the e-mail, including any attached files from your system. Emails to Airbus Defence and Space Limited may be processed, recorded and monitored anywhere in the European Community. Airbus Defence and Space Limited Registered Office: Gunnels Wood Road, Stevenage, Hertfordshire, SG1 2AS. Registered in England and Wales under company number 02449259. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
