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Document: draft-ietf-core-coap-tcp-tls-07 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2017-04-09 IETF LC End Date: 2017-04-09 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I saw some issues. Major issues: Minor issues: -I am not a CoAP expert, but list comments from Mark Nottingham are of concern (to [core] Mon, 10 April 2017 04:07 UTC). Nits/editorial comments: -Please spell out acronyms at first use. -Not sure if other documents address this, but does this document assume fixed CoAP devices as end point (not moving and connectivity is assumed 'the same' during the TCP session?) Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
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