Hi, Adrian. Two points:- I don't see an explanation of northbound in -05.- In the new text at the end of s2.1.2 s/whole the controllers/while the controllers/ Otherwise, the extra text and changes look helpful. Best wshes,Elwyn
Sent from Samsung tablet. -------- Original message --------From: Adrian Farrel <[email protected]> Date: 04/09/2017 10:47 (GMT+00:00) To: 'Elwyn Davies' <[email protected]>, [email protected] Cc: [email protected], [email protected], [email protected] Subject: RE: [Teas] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04 Thanks Elwyn, Clarified in the next revision. Adrian > -----Original Message----- > From: Teas [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Elwyn Davies > Sent: 28 August 2017 20:24 > To: [email protected] > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: [Teas] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04 > > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your > document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04 > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies > Review Date: 2017-08-28 > IETF LC End Date: 2017-08-24 > IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-31 > > Summary: Thanks for addressing my Last Call comments on -03. The new version > is ready with one introduced nit. Also I am still of the abstract is somewhat > overlong. > > Nit: > s6, para 2: The SDN term 'northbound' has appeared in the new version. Needs > brief explanation. > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > > > _______________________________________________ > Teas mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/teas
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