Hi, Adrian.
OK, it's a fair cop.
Cheers,Elwyn
Sent from Samsung tablet.
-------- Original message --------From: Adrian Farrel <[email protected]>
Date: 04/09/2017 17:59 (GMT+00:00) To: 'Elwyn Davies'
<[email protected]>, [email protected] Cc:
[email protected], [email protected], [email protected]
Subject: RE: [Teas] Genart telechat review of
draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04
Hi Elwyn, -04 has Some of this will be the TED as is normal for a PCE and can
be collected using the mechanisms already in place (such as listening to
the IGPs, using BGP-LS [RFC7752], or northbound export of YANG- encoded data
[I-D.ietf-teas-yang-te-topo]).-05 has Some of this will be the TED as is
normal for a PCE and can be collected using the mechanisms already in place
(such as listening to the IGPs, using BGP-LS [RFC7752], or northbound export
of YANG- encoded data [I-D.ietf-teas-yang-te-topo] from the network elements
to the controller). I think that probably gives enough context. Yes, thanks
for the typo in 2.1.2. I'll save it for Auth48. A From: Elwyn Davies
[mailto:[email protected]]
Sent: 04 September 2017 14:46
To: [email protected]; [email protected]
Cc: [email protected]; [email protected];
[email protected]
Subject: RE: [Teas] Genart telechat review of
draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04 Hi, Adrian. Two points:- I don't see an
explanation of northbound in -05.- In the new text at the end of s2.1.2 s/whole
the controllers/while the controllers/ Otherwise, the extra text and changes
look helpful. Best wshes,Elwyn Sent from Samsung tablet. -------- Original
message --------From: Adrian Farrel <[email protected]> Date: 04/09/2017
10:47 (GMT+00:00) To: 'Elwyn Davies' <[email protected]>, [email protected]
Cc: [email protected], [email protected],
[email protected] Subject: RE: [Teas] Genart telechat review of
draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04 Thanks Elwyn,
Clarified in the next revision.
Adrian
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> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
> Review result: Ready with Nits
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> Document: draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04
> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
> Review Date: 2017-08-28
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-08-24
> IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-31
>
> Summary: Thanks for addressing my Last Call comments on -03. The new version
> is ready with one introduced nit. Also I am still of the abstract is somewhat
> overlong.
>
> Nit:
> s6, para 2: The SDN term 'northbound' has appeared in the new version. Needs
> brief explanation.
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