Hi Christer, We discussed your first comment and we agree with Toerless's response. We believe that the intro does express the intent and purpose of this BCP adequately. Based on your second comment, we have changed the title of Section 4 to "Functional Guidelines". The new version has been uploaded.
Thanks for taking the time and effort to read this BCP. Best wishes, Percy -----Original Message----- From: Toerless Eckert [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Thursday, September 14, 2017 2:59 PM To: Christer Holmberg <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected]; [email protected] Subject: Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mboned-interdomain-peering-bcp-10 On Sat, Sep 02, 2017 at 12:16:18PM +0000, Christer Holmberg wrote: > > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=http-3A__wiki.tools.ietf.o > rg_area_gen_trac_wiki_GenArtfaq&d=DwIBAg&c=LFYZ-o9_HUMeMTSQicvjIg&r=4Z > 9x1ZAReZp_mJahI6h9bQ&m=Yk2i9Ji8MOfUjKFN0Jp-3wS1nKYQtvqPqcyy5j0Rc2o&s=D > GgoHGkoQq2XyywjloPLLrHgVKLzBLrEJ8qSkNxKa3I&e= > <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=http-3A__wiki.tools.ietf.o > rg_area_gen_trac_wiki_GenArtfaq&d=DwMFAg&c=LFYZ-o9_HUMeMTSQicvjIg&r=4Z > 9x1ZAReZp_mJahI6h9bQ&m=iIo_51LYIireg4AnsuBoZIWVunRNL9x6ZXHqz5Q2CGc&s=p > eDTnfOaiDiT8_m4J-VWJr70Nt0m41lLVGq3yYls12k&e=>> > > Minor Issues: > > Q1: The Introduction talks about the growing usage of multicast, and the it > begins the list what the document does. But, what is the background and need > for the document? Is there a problem? Are there interoperability issues? At > the end of the section it is said that ways to improve are identified, but it > is unclear exactly what needs to be improved. I think it would be good to say > a few words in the Introduction about the issues and problems. I am a bit at a loss. This is a BCP, eg: it is meant to document current best practices. It is not meant to suggest "improvements" for protocols or the like. The abstract and intro do IMHO pretty well stsate the intent and purpose of the doc. Maybe its just surprising to you that there has so far been no document to describe how to deploy IP multicast interdomain, especially with the inclusion of of options such as GRE and AMT - and simplifying it by only using SSM ?? Or else: Do you have any text to propose ? > Editorial Issues: > > > > Q2: The title of section 4 is ?Supporting Functionality?. That seems a little > strange in my eyes. Supporting functionality of what? > All the subsections are called "<function-foobar> Guidlines", so how about wee call the whole section "Functional Guidelines" ? Cheers Toerless --- [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
