Hi, Brian:
The changes we discussed has been reflected in the Page 19 and Page20 of v-(13)
of draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam now since the change is related to
jitter and delay which are common data we can use in
draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods. Do you think we should add any
other text in draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods-10?
Yes, forgot to fix typo
OLD TEXT:
"
identity protocol-id-propreitary {
base protocol-id;
description
"Propreitary protocol (e.g.,IP SLA).";
}
"
NEW TEXT:
"
identity protocol-id-proprietary {
base protocol-id;
description
"Proprietary protocol (e.g.,IP SLA).";
}
"
Let me know if I address your comments. I can issue another version if you like.
-Qin
-----邮件原件-----
发件人: Brian E Carpenter [mailto:[email protected]]
发送时间: 2017年10月24日 3:02
收件人: [email protected]; General Area
Review Team
主题: Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods-10.txt
Hi,
I don't see all the changes that were discussed in this version, and the typo
in 'propreitary' has not been fixed. This does not seem ready for the telechat
to me.
Regards
Brian
On 24/10/2017 02:00, [email protected] wrote:
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Layer Independent OAM Management in the
> Multi-Layer Environment WG of the IETF.
>
> Title : Retrieval Methods YANG Data Model for
> Connectionless Operations, Administration, and Maintenance(OAM) protocols
> Authors : Deepak Kumar
> Michael Wang
> Qin Wu
> Reshad Rahman
> Srihari Raghavan
> Filename : draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods-10.txt
> Pages : 35
> Date : 2017-10-23
>
> Abstract:
> This document presents a retrieval method YANG Data model for
> connectionless OAM protocols. It provides technology-independent RPC
> operations for connectionless OAM protocols. The retrieval methods
> model presented here can be extended to include technology specific
> details. This is leading to uniformity between OAM protocols and
> support both nested OAM workflows (i.e., performing OAM functions at
> different levels through a unified interface) and interacting OAM
> workflows ( i.e., performing OAM functions at same levels through a
> unified interface).
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-o
> am-methods/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-me
> thods-10
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionl
> ess-oam-methods-10
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-
> oam-methods-10
>
>
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