OK, as long as there is a cross-reference that seems fine.
Regards
Brian
On 24/10/2017 14:18, Qin Wu wrote:
> Hi, Brian:
> The changes we discussed has been reflected in the Page 19 and Page20 of
> v-(13) of draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam now since the change is
> related to jitter and delay which are common data we can use in
> draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods. Do you think we should add
> any other text in draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods-10?
> Yes, forgot to fix typo
> OLD TEXT:
> "
> identity protocol-id-propreitary {
> base protocol-id;
> description
> "Propreitary protocol (e.g.,IP SLA).";
> }
> "
> NEW TEXT:
> "
> identity protocol-id-proprietary {
> base protocol-id;
> description
> "Proprietary protocol (e.g.,IP SLA).";
> }
> "
> Let me know if I address your comments. I can issue another version if you
> like.
>
> -Qin
> -----邮件原件-----
> 发件人: Brian E Carpenter [mailto:[email protected]]
> 发送时间: 2017年10月24日 3:02
> 收件人: [email protected]; General
> Area Review Team
> 主题: Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods-10.txt
>
> Hi,
>
> I don't see all the changes that were discussed in this version, and the typo
> in 'propreitary' has not been fixed. This does not seem ready for the
> telechat to me.
>
> Regards
> Brian
>
> On 24/10/2017 02:00, [email protected] wrote:
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Layer Independent OAM Management in the
>> Multi-Layer Environment WG of the IETF.
>>
>> Title : Retrieval Methods YANG Data Model for
>> Connectionless Operations, Administration, and Maintenance(OAM) protocols
>> Authors : Deepak Kumar
>> Michael Wang
>> Qin Wu
>> Reshad Rahman
>> Srihari Raghavan
>> Filename : draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods-10.txt
>> Pages : 35
>> Date : 2017-10-23
>>
>> Abstract:
>> This document presents a retrieval method YANG Data model for
>> connectionless OAM protocols. It provides technology-independent RPC
>> operations for connectionless OAM protocols. The retrieval methods
>> model presented here can be extended to include technology specific
>> details. This is leading to uniformity between OAM protocols and
>> support both nested OAM workflows (i.e., performing OAM functions at
>> different levels through a unified interface) and interacting OAM
>> workflows ( i.e., performing OAM functions at same levels through a
>> unified interface).
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-o
>> am-methods/
>>
>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-me
>> thods-10
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionl
>> ess-oam-methods-10
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-
>> oam-methods-10
>>
>>
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>>
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