Stewart, thank you for your review. I have entered a Yes ballot. Alissa
> On Oct 24, 2017, at 2:40 PM, Stewart Bryant <[email protected]> wrote: > > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your > document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-netconf-rfc6536bis-07 > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review Date: 2017-10-24 > IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-25 > IESG Telechat date: 2017-10-26 > > Summary: A well written document that is ready for publication > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > > These are really minor but I notices them during the review. > > Paragraphs 1 and 2 of Section 2.2 (simplicity have a lot of overlapping > content. Perhaps they could be merged. > > "This choice matches if all leafs present in the rule match the request." > Maybe > it is different in C/S but the plural of leaf is usually leaves. > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
