Thanks for your review, Meral, we'll make these changes in -14. regards, Al
From: Meral Shirazipour [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Friday, November 17, 2017 7:54 PM To: [email protected]; [email protected] Subject: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13 ... Document: draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2017-11-17 IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-04 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 33], Section 6, "inlcudes"---->"includes" -[Page 34], Section 6.2, "soltuions"---->"solutions" -[Page 35], typo "7.1. Effect of Encypted ACKs"--->"7.1. Effect of Encrypted ACKs" -[Page 37], Section 7.3, point 3 is empty. -Please change the few occurrences of "middle box" to "middlebox" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=http-3A__www.ericsson.com&d=DwQFAg&c=LFYZ-o9_HUMeMTSQicvjIg&r=OfsSu8kTIltVyD1oL72cBw&m=uEjhJp6GHNaj01bTwdhbSK3G6VCzoPIHXwrKvr0OxuA&s=-D2mkUrYK5hsyjdM3Q15h24XDVARu77iXsMolSzDmvE&e=>
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