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> On Nov 18, 2017, at 2:34 PM, MORTON, ALFRED C (AL) <[email protected]> wrote: > > Thanks for your review, Meral, > we’ll make these changes in -14. Yes, thank you for your review, Meral! Kathleen > > regards, > Al > > From: Meral Shirazipour [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Friday, November 17, 2017 7:54 PM > To: [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13 > … > Document: draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13 > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > Review Date: 2017-11-17 > IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-04 > IESG Telechat date: NA > > Summary: > This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC. > > Major issues: > Minor issues: > Nits/editorial comments: > -[Page 33], Section 6, "inlcudes"---->"includes" > -[Page 34], Section 6.2, "soltuions"---->"solutions" > -[Page 35], typo "7.1. Effect of Encypted ACKs"--->"7.1. Effect of > Encrypted ACKs" > -[Page 37], Section 7.3, point 3 is empty. > -Please change the few occurrences of “middle box” to “middlebox” > > Best Regards, > Meral > --- > Meral Shirazipour > Ericsson Research > www.ericsson.com
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