Hi, Thank you for considering the comments. Best, Meral
-----Original Message----- From: Hitoshi Asaeda [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Thursday, November 23, 2017 10:59 PM To: Meral Shirazipour <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mboned-mtrace-v2-21 Dear Meral Shirazipour, Thank you for your careful review. (And sorry for this late response.) We've almost addressed your comments, and will submit the revision whenever we, co-authors, agree on the changes. Please see inline. Subject: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mboned-mtrace-v2-21 Date: Fri, 17 Nov 2017 20:57:07 +0000 > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the > IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > comments. > For more information, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > > Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-rlfa-node-protection-09 > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > Review Date: 2017-11-16 > IETF LC End Date: 2017-11-23 > IESG Telechat date: NA > > Summary: > This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have > comments. > > Major issues: > Minor issues: > Nits/editorial comments: > -please spell out acronyms at first use. Thank you. Done. > -[Page 7,8] > "If an implementation receives an > unknown TLV type for the first TLV in a message, it SHOULD ignore and > silently discard the TLV and any subsequent TLVs in the packet > containing the TLV. If an implementation receives an unknown TLV > type for a subsequent TLV within a message, it SHOULD ignore and > silently discard the TLV. If the length of a TLV exceeds the > available space in the containing packet, the implementation MUST > ignore and silently discard the TLV and any remaining portion of > the containing packet. Any data in the packet after the specified TLV > length is considered to be outside the boundary of the TLV and MUST > be ignored during processing of the TLV. > " > > this whole paragraph is a bit confusing. > > e.g. "If an implementation receives an unknown TLV type for the first > TLV in a message", is this refering to the header TLV? Yes. It is referring to the header. This is clarified in the proposed re-wording as follows; "If an implementation receives an unknown TLV type for the first TLV in a message (i.e., the header TLV), it SHOULD ignore and silently discard the entire packet." > e.g. "If an implementation receives an unknown TLV type for a > subsequent TLV within a message, it SHOULD ignore and silently discard > the TLV.", does this mean TLVs after this one TLV should not be > discarded? For this statement, I'm asking to other co-authors to confirm the meaning, because I (Hitoshi) think this wording gives a wrong impression. We will clarify this statement in the revision ASAP. > e.g. "Any data in the packet after the specified TLV length is > considered to be outside the boundary of the TLV and MUST be ignored > during processing of the TLV.", does this apply to last case only of > when the length of a TLV exceeds the available space in the packet? For that case (overflow bevond the packet boundary), there is no data after the last specified TLV length. This sentence is not needed and will be deleted. > -[Page 12, 13], "UNIX timeval" or timespec? > (please verify if usec or nsec) We'll say; "The following formula converts from a timespec (fractional part in nanoseconds) to a ..." > -[Page 17], "An unique"--->"A unique" Done. Thanks. Best Regards, Hitoshi > Best Regards, > Meral > --- > Meral Shirazipour > Ericsson > Research > www.ericsson.com _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
