Joel, thanks for your review. Sean, thanks for your response. I’m keeping my 
Yes ballot from the last time around. I don’t have a strong opinion about the 
trust anchor issue.

Best,
Alissa

> On Nov 17, 2017, at 1:56 AM, Joel Halpern <[email protected]> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review result: Ready
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> Document: draft-ietf-stir-certificates-15
> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review Date: 2017-11-16
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-11-30
> IESG Telechat date: 2017-12-14
> 
> Summary:
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
>    Section 4 bullet 4 in naming the crypto algorithms refers quite clearly to
>    2 algorithms.  It then references one of them as RS256.  I assume those
>    versed in the field will know which one is meant.  But it would be better
>    if the abbreviation RS256 appeared next to the first reference to whichever
>    algorithm it means.
> 
>    The security considerations section points to RFC 5280 security
>    considerations for most issues.  I presume that the intention is to use
>    that section regarding trusting CAs.  However, it seems that there is an
>    issue here much like that of classic web CAs.  The number of CAs that must
>    be trusted seems to be on the order of the number of countries in the
>    world.  That seems to leave a large window for false or misleading
>    certifications, as I can see nothing which restricts what numbers for which
>    those top level CAs can provide attestation.  I presume we do not want to
>    go down the path of requiring an uber-CA for all national authorities.  I
>    would expect some explicit recognition of this issue in this document.
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
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