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For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-netmod-entity-07 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2017-12-22 IETF LC End Date: NA IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-09 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -Many occurrences : "an sensor"--->"a sensor" -Although mentioned in Section 9, it would be good for context setting to also add similar text to Intro or Abstract Section: " The YANG modules specified in this document define a schema for data that is designed to be accessed via network management protocols such as NETCONF [RFC6241] or RESTCONF [RFC8040]. " Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
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