Hi, Thank you for your review!
Meral Shirazipour <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the > IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD > before posting a new version of the draft. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-netmod-entity-07 > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > Review Date: 2017-12-22 > IETF LC End Date: NA > IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-09 > > Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC. > > Major issues: > Minor issues: > Nits/editorial comments: > -Many occurrences : "an sensor"--->"a sensor" Fixed in my local copy. > -Although mentioned in Section 9, it would be good for context setting to > also add similar text to Intro or Abstract Section: > " > The YANG modules specified in this document define a schema for data > that is designed to be accessed via network management protocols such > as NETCONF [RFC6241] or RESTCONF [RFC8040]. > > " I think that if we add this to this document, the same text should be added to all documents defining YANG modules. It should probably be a recommended template defined in rfc6087bis. This issue should probably be discussed in the WG first. /martin > > > Best Regards, > Meral > --- > Meral Shirazipour > Ericsson Research > www.ericsson.com > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
