Hi Meral, On Thu, Dec 21, 2017 at 7:20 PM, Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazip...@ericsson.com> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for > the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > > Document: draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-06 > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > Review Date: 2017-12-21 > IETF LC End Date: 2018-01-08 > IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-25 > > > Summary: > This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some > comments. > > > Major issues: > Minor issues: > Nits/editorial comments: > > -[Page 3], "It currently read:" and "Now it should read:" seem to have the > exact same text. Is that the intent?
The difference is the insertion of "[this document]" after the reference to [RFC7175]". > -[Page 4], Section 6, "tacking active tails"---->"tracking active tails" Thanks for pointing that out. Donald =============================== Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA d3e...@gmail.com > Best Regards, > > Meral > > --- > > Meral Shirazipour > > Ericsson Research > > www.ericsson.com _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
