Meral, thanks for your review. Donald, thanks for your response. I have entered a No Objection ballot.
Alissa > On Jan 4, 2018, at 7:37 PM, Donald Eastlake <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi Meral, > > On Thu, Dec 21, 2017 at 7:20 PM, Meral Shirazipour > <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> > wrote: >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review >> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for >> the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call >> comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> >> Document: draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-06 >> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour >> Review Date: 2017-12-21 >> IETF LC End Date: 2018-01-08 >> IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-25 >> >> >> Summary: >> This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some >> comments. >> >> >> Major issues: >> Minor issues: >> Nits/editorial comments: >> >> -[Page 3], "It currently read:" and "Now it should read:" seem to have the >> exact same text. Is that the intent? > > The difference is the insertion of "[this document]" after the > reference to [RFC7175]". > >> -[Page 4], Section 6, "tacking active tails"---->"tracking active tails" > > Thanks for pointing that out. > > Donald > =============================== > Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) > 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA > [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> > >> Best Regards, >> >> Meral >> >> --- >> >> Meral Shirazipour >> >> Ericsson Research >> >> www.ericsson.com <http://www.ericsson.com/> > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>
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