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For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8022bis-09.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20180123 IETF LC End Date: 20180115 IESG Telechat date: 20180125 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: (update) I noted these on the 06 version but I refer to 09 (last) version which has been published since my review. - 2 page 3: update RFC 2119 by RFC 8174 (or leave the RFC Editor to do this) - Appendix E page 74 (twice): control-plane-protocl -> control-plane-protocol I trust Yangdoctor about yang correctness. Thanks francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
