Hi Francis,
Thanks for the review. See inline.
On 1/26/18, 3:29 AM, "Benoit Claise (bclaise)" <[email protected]> wrote:
Hi Francis,
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> Document: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8022bis-09.txt
> Reviewer: Francis Dupont
> Review Date: 20180123
> IETF LC End Date: 20180115
> IESG Telechat date: 20180125
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> Summary: Ready
>
> Major issues: None
>
> Minor issues: None
>
> Nits/editorial comments: (update)
> I noted these on the 06 version but I refer to 09 (last) version which
> has been published since my review.
>
> - 2 page 3: update RFC 2119 by RFC 8174 (or leave the RFC Editor to do
> this)
This was updated based on a previous comment from Ben Campbell.
>
> - Appendix E page 74 (twice): control-plane-protocl ->
control-plane-protocol
Good catch.
I introduced an IESG note for this.
I fixed this in the -11 version to assure it wouldn't be missed.
Thanks,
Acee
Regards, Benoit
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