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For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-bier-isis-extensions-06 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2018-02-12 IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-22 ? IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-22 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -please updated references to latest draft version/RFC number -Section 2 would be clearer is the definitions introduced only in this document are identified as such -Please spell out multi topology, sub-domain at first use for MT SD -[Page 6], "advertisments."--->"advertisements" -[Page 8], "occurences"--->"occurrences" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
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