David, thanks for your review. Jim, thanks for your response. I entered a Yes ballot.
Alissa > On May 2, 2018, at 2:54 PM, Jim Schaad <i...@augustcellars.com> wrote: > > I have published a -08 with these changes. > >> -----Original Message----- >> From: David Schinazi <dschin...@apple.com> >> Sent: Thursday, April 26, 2018 8:45 PM >> To: gen-art@ietf.org >> Cc: sp...@ietf.org; i...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5751-bis....@ietf.org >> Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5751-bis-07 >> >> Reviewer: David Schinazi >> Review result: Ready >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review >> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for >> the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call >> comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5751-bis-07 >> Reviewer: David Schinazi >> Review Date: 2018-04-26 >> IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-27 >> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat >> >> Summary: >> This document is clearly written and does a nice job of explaining the >> rationale and historical context of the decisions it made. >> >> Major issues: >> None noticed during this review >> >> Minor issues: >> I was slightly confused by the description of AuthEnvelopedData in 2.4.4: >> it seems to describe data protected by a symmetric AEAD but then >> mentions >> asymmetric keys. But this could be due to my lack of expertise in S/MIME. > > I have tried to clear this up. The following sentence has been added > > In order to distribute the symmetric key, a sender needs to have > access to a public key for each intended > message recipient to use this service. > >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> I believe the RFC2119 reference should also mention RFC8174. > > Done > > Jim > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org <mailto:Gen-art@ietf.org> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>
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