Hello Russ, Thanks a lot for this review.
> Le 14 sept. 2018 à 23:52, Russ Housley <[email protected]> a écrit : > > Reviewer: Russ Housley > Review result: Almost Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-07 > Reviewer: Russ Housley > Review Date: 2018-09-14 > IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-24 > IESG Telechat date: unknown > > Summary: Almost Ready > > > Major Concerns: > > None. > > > Minor Concerns: > > Section 2: Please update the first paragraph to reference RFC 8174 > in addition to RFC 2119, as follows: > > The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT", > "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "NOT RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and > "OPTIONAL" in this document are to be interpreted as described in BCP > 14 [RFC2119] [RFC8174] when, and only when, they appear in all > capitals, as shown here. I was not aware of RFC 8174. Done. I will updated to companion I-D (draft-ietf-tsvwg-fecframe-ext) in a similar way. > Section 2: Please add the definition of ^^. Done. NEW: a^^b a to the power of b > Section 12.1: Please add a normative reference to RFC 8174. Of course. > > The code in Appendix A will not compile using gcc unless you add: > > #include <stdint.h> Done. Regards, Vincent and Belkacem _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
