Thanks. > On Sep 19, 2018, at 7:01 AM, Vincent Roca <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hello Russ, > > Thanks a lot for this review. > >> Le 14 sept. 2018 à 23:52, Russ Housley <[email protected]> a écrit : >> >> Reviewer: Russ Housley >> Review result: Almost Ready >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just >> like any other last call comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-07 >> Reviewer: Russ Housley >> Review Date: 2018-09-14 >> IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-24 >> IESG Telechat date: unknown >> >> Summary: Almost Ready >> >> >> Major Concerns: >> >> None. >> >> >> Minor Concerns: >> >> Section 2: Please update the first paragraph to reference RFC 8174 >> in addition to RFC 2119, as follows: >> >> The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT", >> "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "NOT RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and >> "OPTIONAL" in this document are to be interpreted as described in BCP >> 14 [RFC2119] [RFC8174] when, and only when, they appear in all >> capitals, as shown here. > > I was not aware of RFC 8174. Done. > I will updated to companion I-D (draft-ietf-tsvwg-fecframe-ext) in a similar > way. > > >> Section 2: Please add the definition of ^^. > > Done. > > NEW: > a^^b a to the power of b > >> Section 12.1: Please add a normative reference to RFC 8174. > > Of course. > >> >> The code in Appendix A will not compile using gcc unless you add: >> >> #include <stdint.h> > > Done. > > Regards, > > Vincent and Belkacem >
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