Thanks for the feedback, Meral. I will start preparing an updated draft shortly.
-- Christian Huitema > On Sep 3, 2019, at 8:47 PM, Benjamin Kaduk <[email protected]> wrote: > > Thanks for the review, Meral! > > Authors, I'm going to go ahead and send this over to the IESG, but it will > end up (most likely) on the September 19th telechat, so you have over a > week to get a revision up with fixes. > > -Ben > >> On Tue, Sep 03, 2019 at 05:56:20AM +0000, Meral Shirazipour wrote: >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review >> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for >> the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call >> comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-tls-sni-encryption-05 >> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour >> Review Date: 2019-09-02 >> IETF LC End Date: 2019-09-02 >> IESG Telechat date: NA >> >> >> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as an Informational RFC. >> Major issues: >> >> Minor issues: >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> Some may have already been reported… >> >> -[Page 2], Section 1, "colocated"--->"collocated" >> >> -[Page 3], Section 2, "mutiple"---->"multiple" >> >> -[Page 3], Section 2.1, "fradulent"---->"fraudulent" >> >> -[Page 4], Section 2.1, "MITM inspection", please spell out >> Man-In-The-Middle attack at first use >> >> -[Page 7], Section 3.6, "is the the"---->"is the" >> >> -[Page 10], Section 4.2, "ferver"---->"server" >> >> >> >> >> Best Regards, >> Meral >> --- >> Meral Shirazipour >> Ericsson >> Research >> www.ericsson.com _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
