Meral, thanks for your review. Christian, thanks for your response. I entered a No Objection ballot.
Alissa > On Sep 4, 2019, at 1:26 AM, Christian Huitema <[email protected]> wrote: > > Thanks for the feedback, Meral. I will start preparing an updated draft > shortly. > > -- Christian Huitema > >> On Sep 3, 2019, at 8:47 PM, Benjamin Kaduk <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> Thanks for the review, Meral! >> >> Authors, I'm going to go ahead and send this over to the IESG, but it will >> end up (most likely) on the September 19th telechat, so you have over a >> week to get a revision up with fixes. >> >> -Ben >> >>> On Tue, Sep 03, 2019 at 05:56:20AM +0000, Meral Shirazipour wrote: >>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review >>> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for >>> the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call >>> comments. >>> >>> For more information, please see the FAQ at >>> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >>> >>> Document: draft-ietf-tls-sni-encryption-05 >>> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour >>> Review Date: 2019-09-02 >>> IETF LC End Date: 2019-09-02 >>> IESG Telechat date: NA >>> >>> >>> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as an Informational RFC. >>> Major issues: >>> >>> Minor issues: >>> >>> Nits/editorial comments: >>> Some may have already been reported… >>> >>> -[Page 2], Section 1, "colocated"--->"collocated" >>> >>> -[Page 3], Section 2, "mutiple"---->"multiple" >>> >>> -[Page 3], Section 2.1, "fradulent"---->"fraudulent" >>> >>> -[Page 4], Section 2.1, "MITM inspection", please spell out >>> Man-In-The-Middle attack at first use >>> >>> -[Page 7], Section 3.6, "is the the"---->"is the" >>> >>> -[Page 10], Section 4.2, "ferver"---->"server" >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> Best Regards, >>> Meral >>> --- >>> Meral Shirazipour >>> Ericsson >>> Research >>> www.ericsson.com > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
