Dear Pascal, that works for me. Thanks for attending my comments. Cheers, - vijay
On Mon, Jan 6, 2020, 4:17 AM Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <pthub...@cisco.com> wrote: > Hello Vijay > > Good point. I suggest to add text in the intro that defines the acronym. > The proposed modified sentence is; > " > In particular, 6LoWPAN ND introduces a unicast host Address Registration > mechanism > that reduces the use of multicast compared to the Duplicate Address > Detection (DAD) > mechanism defined in IPv6 ND. > " > > It will show up with the next revision. > > Many thanks! > > Pascal > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> > > Sent: jeudi 26 décembre 2019 18:41 > > To: gen-art@ietf.org > > Cc: last-c...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd....@ietf.org; 6...@ietf.org > > Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd-12 > > > > Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani > > Review result: Ready > > > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review > > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG > for the > > IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > comments. > > > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > > > Document: draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd-12 > > Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani > > Review Date: 2019-12-26 > > IETF LC End Date: 2020-01-09 > > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > > > Summary: This I-D is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. > > > > Major issues: 0. > > > > Minor issues: 0. > > > > Nits/editorial comments: 1. > > > > 1/ Figure 6: Please expand the acronym DAD, this acronym is further used > in > > S7.1. The expansion will aid in understanding the usage of DAD in S7.1.. > > > > Thanks, > > > > - vijay > > > >
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