Vijay, thanks for your review. Pascal, thanks for your response. I entered a No Objection ballot.
Alissa > On Jan 6, 2020, at 8:22 AM, Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurb...@gmail.com> wrote: > > Dear Pascal, that works for me. Thanks for attending my comments. > Cheers, > - vijay > > On Mon, Jan 6, 2020, 4:17 AM Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <pthub...@cisco.com > <mailto:pthub...@cisco.com>> wrote: > Hello Vijay > > Good point. I suggest to add text in the intro that defines the acronym. The > proposed modified sentence is; > " > In particular, 6LoWPAN ND introduces a unicast host Address Registration > mechanism > that reduces the use of multicast compared to the Duplicate Address Detection > (DAD) > mechanism defined in IPv6 ND. > " > > It will show up with the next revision. > > Many thanks! > > Pascal > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org > > <mailto:nore...@ietf..org>> > > Sent: jeudi 26 décembre 2019 18:41 > > To: gen-art@ietf.org <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org> > > Cc: last-c...@ietf.org <mailto:last-c...@ietf.org>; > > draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd....@ietf.org > > <mailto:draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd....@ietf.org>; 6...@ietf.org > > <mailto:6...@ietf.org> > > Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd-12 > > > > Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani > > Review result: Ready > > > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for > > the > > IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > > comments. > > > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>>. > > > > Document: draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd-12 > > Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani > > Review Date: 2019-12-26 > > IETF LC End Date: 2020-01-09 > > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > > > Summary: This I-D is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. > > > > Major issues: 0. > > > > Minor issues: 0. > > > > Nits/editorial comments: 1. > > > > 1/ Figure 6: Please expand the acronym DAD, this acronym is further used in > > S7.1. The expansion will aid in understanding the usage of DAD in S7.1. > > > > Thanks, > > > > - vijay > > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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