> On Aug 10, 2023, at 1:51 PM, Ines Robles 
> <mariainesrobles=40googlemail....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Many thanks Laurence for addressing my comments and for the providing 
> clarifications
> 
> I understand the provided motive to not imply the trust to be static. 
> Perhaps, one way to convey the potentially varying degree of trust dependant 
> on context can be achieved by replacing "wishes" (which is usually attributed 
> to human sentiments) and as well as changing "how much" (which represents in 
> my understanding a quantity value):
> 
> Thus, instead of:
> "This claims set is used by a relying party, server or service to determine 
> how much it wishes to trust the entity."
> how about?:
> "This claims set is used by a relying party, server or service to determine 
> the applicable trust in the entity."

It’s kind of an important sentence. Appreciate the thoughtful wordsmithing 
here. :-)

I like this:
    "This claims set is used by a relying party, server or service to determine 
the type and degree of trust placed in the entity”

This is OK too:
    "This claims set is used by a relying party, server or service to determine 
the type and degree of trust attributed to the entity”

LL


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