Thanks for the quick update, Med! And congrats to the editors and WG, this was a very enjoyable read.
On Tue, 24 Feb 2026 at 15:17, <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi Thomas, > > Many thanks for the review. > > These are excellent suggestions. Except very few one, went with almost all > your suggestions as you can see at: > https://github.com/ietf-wg-cats/draft-ietf-cats-framework/pull/153. > > Cheers, > Med (as author) > > PS: rendered diff can be seen here: > https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/iddiff?url_1=https://ietf-wg-cats.github.io/draft-ietf-cats-framework/draft-ietf-cats-framework.txt&url_2=https://ietf-wg-cats.github.io/draft-ietf-cats-framework/boucadair-patch-2/draft-ietf-cats-framework.txt > > > -----Message d'origine----- > > De : Thomas Fossati via Datatracker <[email protected]> > > Envoyé : lundi 23 février 2026 14:23 > > À : [email protected] > > Cc : [email protected]; [email protected]; last- > > [email protected] > > Objet : draft-ietf-cats-framework-19 ietf last call Genart review > > > > > > Document: draft-ietf-cats-framework > > Title: A Framework for Computing-Aware Traffic Steering (CATS) > > Reviewer: Thomas Fossati > > Review result: Ready > > > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. 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(I have a few suggestions on how to improve > > them further, but I could not easily find the repository that > > hosts the document, so I could not provide the suggestions in the > > form of a PR.) > > > > Major issues: none > > > > Minor issues: none > > > > Nits/editorial comments: a few, see below. > > > > §1 > > > > slight reflow: > > > > OLD > > The CATS framework is an overlay framework for the selection of > > the suitable service contact instances from a set of candidates. > > > > NEW > > The CATS framework is an overlay framework that selects suitable > > service contact instances from a set of candidates. > > > > typo: > > > > OLD > > [...] combination of networking and computing metrics determine > > > > NEW > > [...] combination of networking and computing metrics determines > > > > §2 > > > > s/decision making/decision-making/ > > s/as distinct from/as opposed to/ > > > > §3.1 > > > > s/other than they are reachable/other than that they are > > reachable/ > > > > §3.2 > > > > slight reflow: > > > > OLD > > This document does not make any assumption about the structure and > > semantic of this identifier. An example of such ID is a unicast IP > > address that uniquely identifies the location of a service > > instance. > > > > NEW > > This document makes no assumptions about the structure or > > semantics of this identifier. One example of such an ID is a > > unicast IP address, which uniquely identifies the location of a > > service instance. > > > > s/deployment specific/deployment-specific/ > > > > §3.4.1 > > > > s/that run in same/that run in the same/ > > > > §3.4.6 > > > > s/computing related/computing-related/ > > > > §4.3 > > > > s/in order to not constrain/so as not to constrain/ s/will be > > removed and/will be removed, and/ > > > > §4.4 > > s/the flow or packets identification type/the flow or packet > > identification type/ > > > > §5.1 > > > > s/Such correlation/Such a correlation/ > > or > > s/Such a correlation/This correlation/ > > > > §5.2 > > > > s/Retrieve active classification table/Retrieve the active > > classification table/ > > > > §5.4 > > > > s/this document suggests to implement the normalization > > function/this document suggests implementing the normalization > > function/ > > > > §6 > > > > s/may be modified by an attacker resulting in disrupted service > > delivery/may be modified by an attacker, resulting in disrupted > > service delivery > > > > §7 > > > > s/at the application/protocol level depending/at the > > application/protocol level, depending/ > > > > > > ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ > Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations > confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc > pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. 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