Hi Michael,
On Thu, May 14, 2026 at 1:47 PM Michael Richardson <[email protected]> wrote: > Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker <[email protected]> wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by > the > > IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any > > other last call comments. > > Thank you for the review. > > > Nits/editorial comments: > > > Sec. 1 This document does not follow that pattern, but future > documents > > may update only the YANG module. > -> This document does not follow that pattern, so future > > documents may update only the YANG module. > > Changed. > > > a new IETF standard mechanism for extensions modeled after the > > mechanism **presented** in [RFC8520] > > done > > > Sec. 5.1 Constrained IoT devices is an important issue in IoT. The > > document is missing a reference to RFC7228-bis which will become an > RFC > > soon. > > But no terms from RFC7228 are used. > > > Sec. 8 > > > inappropriate/informal writing: During development of this merged > YANG > > module, **advice was given** to better organize mutually exclusive > > Attributes > > What do you want me to say? > "It was advised"? > "We were advised"? > "The WG was advised"? > "YANG reviewer suggested"? > > > Section 8.3 YANG module is given and there is an Yang doctor review. > > Yes? > > > Sec. 9.2 RFC XXXX refer to itself as in all documents that contain > YANG > > modules it could be changed to "this document" > > // RFCEDITOR: please replace XXXX in this entire code fragment > // with the RFC number assigned and remove this notice. > > > Acknowledgements contain one author name (the first author) > > okay, Kent removed from acknowledgement. We weren't sure who was going to > step back as an author to get <=5. > > > Posting a new version. > > Actually two new versions. All is well, thanks for your hard work. Behcet > > -- > Michael Richardson <[email protected]> . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting ) > Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide > > ** My working hours and your working hours may be different. > ** > ** Please do not feel obligated to reply outside your normal working hours > ** >
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