Document: draft-ietf-netmod-immutable-flag
Title: YANG Metadata Annotation for Immutable Flag
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-netmod-immutable-flag-11
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2026-05-27
IETF LC End Date: 2026-06-09
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
    In section 5.4 on annotating Lists, paragraphs 2 and 3 say almost the same
    thing.  Paragraph 2 is cleareer, although paragraph 3 has a useful forward
    reference. I presume I am misreading paragraphs 4 and 5 of section 5.4 (on
    annotating Lists).  Paragraph 4 seems to ssay that one can not mark an
    entire list as immutable.  And paragraph 5 seems to then talk about the
    meaning if a list is immutable.  Is paragraph 5 intended for the case where
    immutability is inherited from a parent?  If so, it would be good to say so.


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