Hi Joel, Thanks a lot for the review and the good catch. The authors have incorporated a fix in a GitHub PR to address your comments: https://github.com/netmod-wg/immutable-flag/pull/24/changes, and you may also check the full diff at: https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/iddiff?doc_1=draft-ietf-netmod-immutable-flag&url_2=https://netmod-wg.github.io/immutable-flag/draft-ietf-netmod-immutable-flag.txt.
We will post the update to Datatracker after the IETF LC concludes. Please let us know if you have further comments. Thanks again. Best Regards, Qiufang //co-author -----Original Message----- From: Joel Halpern via Datatracker [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Thursday, May 28, 2026 6:12 AM To: [email protected] Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] Subject: draft-ietf-netmod-immutable-flag-11 ietf last call Genart review Document: draft-ietf-netmod-immutable-flag Title: YANG Metadata Annotation for Immutable Flag Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-netmod-immutable-flag-11 Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review Date: 2026-05-27 IETF LC End Date: 2026-06-09 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: In section 5.4 on annotating Lists, paragraphs 2 and 3 say almost the same thing. Paragraph 2 is cleareer, although paragraph 3 has a useful forward reference. I presume I am misreading paragraphs 4 and 5 of section 5.4 (on annotating Lists). Paragraph 4 seems to ssay that one can not mark an entire list as immutable. And paragraph 5 seems to then talk about the meaning if a list is immutable. Is paragraph 5 intended for the case where immutability is inherited from a parent? If so, it would be good to say so. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
