Hi Roni,
Thank you for your GENART review of draft-ietf-suit-update-management. You noted that the term “primary-cell” in Section 5.3 was unfamiliar and suggested adding it to the terminology section. We reviewed this comment during preparation of the latest revision (-12) and updated the document accordingly. Could you please confirm whether you consider the issue resolved in the current version, or whether there are any remaining concerns that should be addressed before publication? Thank you again for the review and helpful feedback. Regards, Brendan Moran From: Roni Even via Datatracker <[email protected]> Date: Saturday, 20 December 2025 at 11:27 To: [email protected] <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected] <[email protected]>; [email protected] <[email protected]>; [email protected] <[email protected]> Subject: [Suit] draft-ietf-suit-update-management-10 ietf last call Genart review Document: draft-ietf-suit-update-management Title: Update Management Extensions for Software Updates for Internet of Things (SUIT) Manifests Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-suit-update-management-?? Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2025-12-20 IETF LC End Date: 2026-01-02 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: The document is ready for publication as standard track RFC with nit Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: In section 5.3 there is a term primary-cell which I am unfamiliar with. Can you add it to the terminology section _______________________________________________ Suit mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected] IMPORTANT NOTICE: The contents of this email and any attachments are confidential and may also be privileged. If you are not the intended recipient, please notify the sender immediately and do not disclose the contents to any other person, use it for any purpose, or store or copy the information in any medium. Thank you.
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