HI, I reviewed revision 12 and find my issue resolved Roni Even
On Thu, 11 Jun 2026 at 12:47 Brendan Moran <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Roni, > > > Thank you for your GENART review of draft-ietf-suit-update-management. > > > You noted that the term “primary-cell” in Section 5.3 was unfamiliar and > suggested adding it to the terminology section. > > > We reviewed this comment during preparation of the latest revision (-12) > and updated the document accordingly. > > > Could you please confirm whether you consider the issue resolved in the > current version, or whether there are any remaining concerns that should be > addressed before publication? > > > Thank you again for the review and helpful feedback. > > > Regards, > > > Brendan Moran > > > *From: *Roni Even via Datatracker <[email protected]> > *Date: *Saturday, 20 December 2025 at 11:27 > *To: *[email protected] <[email protected]> > *Cc: *[email protected] < > [email protected]>; [email protected] < > [email protected]>; [email protected] <[email protected]> > *Subject: *[Suit] draft-ietf-suit-update-management-10 ietf last call > Genart review > > Document: draft-ietf-suit-update-management > Title: Update Management Extensions for Software Updates for Internet of > Things > (SUIT) Manifests Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. > > Document: draft-ietf-suit-update-management-?? > Reviewer: Roni Even > Review Date: 2025-12-20 > IETF LC End Date: 2026-01-02 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: > The document is ready for publication as standard track RFC with nit > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > In section 5.3 there is a term primary-cell which I am unfamiliar with. > Can you > add it to the terminology section > > > _______________________________________________ > Suit mailing list -- [email protected] > To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected] > IMPORTANT NOTICE: The contents of this email and any attachments are > confidential and may also be privileged. If you are not the intended > recipient, please notify the sender immediately and do not disclose the > contents to any other person, use it for any purpose, or store or copy the > information in any medium. Thank you. >
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