Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-uncacheable-files
Title: Adding an Uncacheable File Data Attribute to NFSv4.2
Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-uncacheable-files-11
Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
Review Date: 2026-08-12
IETF LC End Date: 2026-08-24
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This I-D is ready to be published as a Standards Track document.

Major issues: 0

Minor issues: 0

Nits/editorial comments: 2

Nits/editorial
1. Section 1: s/that client-side caching of file data for a particular
file/that client-side caching of the content of a particular file/
   (I note that you use the term "file data" frequently in the I-D, so if that
   is the word accepted by the community, please consider the above nit as
   advisory.)
2. Section 8: Perhaps put the first sentence from here as introductory text in
Section 7, which first uses the word "XDR".  It may help some readers not
familiar with the term to know what XDR stands for when they first encounter it.

Thanks,

- vijay


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