> On Aug 12, 2026, at 8:47 AM, Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <[email protected]> > wrote: > > Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-uncacheable-files > Title: Adding an Uncacheable File Data Attribute to NFSv4.2 > Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. > > Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-uncacheable-files-11 > Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani > Review Date: 2026-08-12 > IETF LC End Date: 2026-08-24 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: This I-D is ready to be published as a Standards Track document. > > Major issues: 0 > > Minor issues: 0 > > Nits/editorial comments: 2
Vijay, thanks for the review! > > Nits/editorial > 1. Section 1: s/that client-side caching of file data for a particular > file/that client-side caching of the content of a particular file/ > (I note that you use the term "file data" frequently in the I-D, so if that > is the word accepted by the community, please consider the above nit as > advisory.) Yes, file data is accepted by the community. We were actually requested to define this during WGLC. > 2. Section 8: Perhaps put the first sentence from here as introductory text in > Section 7, which first uses the word "XDR". It may help some readers not > familiar with the term to know what XDR stands for when they first encounter > it. XDR is first introduced in Section 2: Using the process described in [RFC8178], the revisions in this document extend NFSv4.2 [RFC7862]. They are built on top of the external data representation (XDR) [RFC4506] generated from [RFC7863]. These are pretty much boilerplate sections for NFSv4 drafts. I can either: - Expand the first use in the section 7 title - Remove the second expansion in Section 8 Or leave as is? > > Thanks, > > - vijay > >
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