Hi Sue, I replied too hastily, as I do have some followups. My apologies.
On 8/17/26 5:13 PM, Sue Hares via Datatracker wrote: > Document: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-extensions > Title: RDAP Extensions > Reviewer: Sue Hares > Review result: On the Right Track > > This Early review finds the document is clear and comprehensive, except for > the > points below. > > The text is on the right track. As my familiarity with RDAP and JSON is dated, > I have 3 suggestions and 1 question . > > 1) Split section 7.2 into pieces similar to : > 7.2.1 - Registration procedures, > 7.2.2 - Expert review > > The split will help the expert review process by clearly defining registration > and expert review separately. > > 2) Section 7.2 paragraph 5, starting with "all registrations SHOULD" > > Do you want to state this as a registration requirement, or as an instruction > to the expert as "latitude" accepted by this document? It is rather unclear. > At the very least, make it clear whether it is a requirement or a suggestion > for the expert reviewer. These changes are in github: https://github.com/anewton1998/draft-regext-rdap-extensions/blob/a3eae71202542efaad9fbeb9c05811bfb8b46240/draft-regext-rdap-extensions.md?plain=1#L1063 > > 3) Multiple experts reviewing the document > Without at least 2 experts, this may become difficult for IANA to manage. I > assume that the The last sentence is incomplete. > > 4) How does the TLD list get expanded? I'm a little unclear on this point. > Is > it by expert review, IETF review or something else? Did I miss this or > misunderstand the text? If I have, just kindly let me know. Which text are you referencing? If this is about the bootstrap, it is maintained by IANA. > > Suggestion: > It seems like text on redirect and security repeats several time. Have one of > the authors look toward reducing the repetition. Some part of me wants a bit of the explanation in the security considerations section, but I see the point of duplication. We'll see what we can do here. -andy _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
