On Dec 13, 2007 3:53 PM, Edward <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Another updated version, I think this version looks more like a shield now, > rather a tongue.
yeah, it does. that helps. > Black and White Version: > http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/ApacheVelocityTools3BW.png nah, i prefer color. > Solid Color Version: > http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/ApacheVelocityTools3Solid.png > > And one with gradient: > http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/ApacheVelocityTools3Gradient.png i actually like these both pretty well. i'd be hard pressed to pick. thanks for trimming some of that whitespace. :) how's this, i'm not sure what Chris Townsen's feedback was, but i think you should either: a) pick one of the two color ones above and call that your submission b) or if you are having a hard time deciding, ask for people on the [EMAIL PROTECTED] list to vote between them. whichever way, i think we're probably about ready to wrap this up. > I'll make an example on how it'll fit the website as soon as I'm done with > my design, if its okay. :) that'd be great. it'll be smaller than it currently is too, right? > Regards, > > Edward > > > On Dec 13, 2007 12:24 PM, Nathan Bubna <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > > On Dec 12, 2007 5:54 PM, Edward <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > > Hi, > > > > > > Thanks for giving me feedback. Heres an updated version: > > > [image: ApacheVelocityTools2.png picture by shadowpwner] > > > and a link for those who can't see it: > > > > > http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/ApacheVelocityTools2.png > > > > The colors mesh perfectly now. :) I also like the different font > > weights for Velocity and Tools. > > > > > I tried to make the T look more like a T, but now to me it looks like a > > > tongue :P (See the resemblance?) > > > > Yeah, though my first thought was that it looked like a shield, which > > is a bit more noble than a tongue. :) I wonder if straightening out > > the wings of the V would help... > > > > > Also, here it is with the current template: > > > > > > > > http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/VeltoolsNewLogoPS2.png > > > > > > The logo will probably be 50% of the current size, I enlarged it so you > > > could see the details. > > > > Cool, though i'd be curious to see how well the details compress also. > > And there still seems like more whitespace than necessary on the > > right side and the top. > > > > > Regards, > > > > > > Edward > > > > > > On Dec 11, 2007 8:57 PM, Nathan Bubna <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > > > > > > Hey Edward, > > > > > > > > That's a pretty good start, though i confess that it took me a second > > > > to realize that the symbol was a V with a T inset. The T is > > > > particularly hard to recognize. Still, the symbol looks a lot > > > > snazzier than the current meager wrench (no offense, if you're still > > > > out there Tim Colson :). I do think the color scheme could use some > > > > adjustment to fit better, as it clashes a bit right now. I attached a > > > > screenshot of this draft logo in the velocitytools docs to show that. > > > > > > > > I think that's it for stylistic feedback. I'm not really the best at > > > > that. Functionally, the logo will need to be smaller and could > > > > probably stand to have some of the surrounding whitespace reduced to > > > > make better use of its space. > > > > > > > > Thanks for working on this! I'm excited to have a nice logo for once! > > :) > > > > > > > > peace, > > > > nathan > > > > > > > > On Dec 11, 2007 7:17 PM, Edward <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > > > > Hello All, > > > > > > > > > > I entered the Google Highly Open Participation Contest for the > > Velocity > > > > > Tools logo. > > > > > > > > > > Here is my proposition so far: > > > > > > > > > > [image: ApacheVelocityTools.png picture by shadowpwner] > > > > > > > > > > In case the image doesn't show: > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/ApacheVelocityTools.png > > > > > > > > > > Please note this will not be the final draft, but only something to > > > > start us > > > > > off with. > > > > > > > > > > Please give helpful comments and suggestions, to improve my work. > > > > (Example: > > > > > Too simple, colors don't match layout, etc.) > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Regards, > > > > > > > > > > Edward > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > http://code.google.com/p/google-highly-open-participation-asf/issues/detail?id=52 > > > > > > > > > > > > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > > To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > > > > For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > -- > > > Light travels faster than sound. 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