cam         05/09/04 23:04:25

  Modified:    xml/htdocs/doc/en genkernel.xml
  Log:
  Some minor english-only corrections.

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http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/genkernel.xml?rev=1.24&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
diff : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/genkernel.xml.diff?r1=1.23&r2=1.24&cvsroot=gentoo

Index: genkernel.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/genkernel.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.23
retrieving revision 1.24
diff -u -r1.23 -r1.24
--- genkernel.xml       18 Aug 2005 11:33:54 -0000      1.23
+++ genkernel.xml       4 Sep 2005 23:04:25 -0000       1.24
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/genkernel.xml,v 1.23 
2005/08/18 11:33:54 neysx Exp $ -->
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/genkernel.xml,v 1.24 
2005/09/04 23:04:25 cam Exp $ -->
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 
 <guide link="/doc/en/genkernel.xml">
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
 
 <abstract>
 This guide intends to provide a reference of all the functions provided by
-genkernel. 
+genkernel.
 </abstract>
 
 <license/>
@@ -77,14 +77,14 @@
 <p>
 To obtain genkernel, run <c>emerge genkernel</c> from the command line. If you
 are using the <uri
-link="/doc/en/handbook/2005.0/hb-install-about.xml#doc_chap2_sect1"> Gentoo
+link="/doc/en/handbook/2005.0/hb-install-about.xml#doc_chap2_sect1">Gentoo
 Reference Platform</uri> (GRP), remember to install binary packages by passing
 the <c>-k</c> flag to emerge. Since the GRP is bundled with an older version of
 genkernel, the flags may be different. In any case, consult <c>genkernel
 --help</c> for help on how to use the version of genkernel installed on your
 system.
 </p>
- 
+
 </body>
 </section>
 </chapter>
@@ -145,7 +145,6 @@
 
 </body>
 </section>
-
 <section>
 <title>Configuration Flags</title>
 <body>
@@ -539,7 +538,7 @@
   </li>
   <li>
     Add the initrd information as required by the bootloader. Consult the <uri
-    link="/doc/en/handbook/handbook-x86.xml?part=1&amp;chap=10"> Bootloader
+    link="/doc/en/handbook/handbook-x86.xml?part=1&amp;chap=10">Bootloader
     Configuration Chapter</uri> of the Gentoo Handbook for details on how to
     make your bootloader initrd-aware.
   </li>
@@ -633,7 +632,7 @@
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Running genkernel (with flags), after employing genkernel.conf">
-# <i>genkernel --gensplash --kerneldir=/path/to/alternate/kernel/sources \ 
+# <i>genkernel --gensplash --kerneldir=/path/to/alternate/kernel/sources \
 --kernel-config=/path/to/preferred/configfile --install all</i>
 </pre>
 
@@ -654,7 +653,7 @@
 
 <p>
 The genkernel utility can build kernel and initrd images that provide support
-for network booting, or <e>netboot</e>ing . With any luck, you should be able
+for network booting, or <e>netboot</e>ing. With any luck, you should be able
 to netboot any recent computer into the environment provided by the
 Installation CD.
 </p>
@@ -690,8 +689,8 @@
 <pre caption="Configuring a 2.6.x series kernel to support your NIC driver">
 Device Drivers --->
    Networking Support --->
-      Ethernet (10 or 100Mbit)  ---> 
-         [*] Ethernet (10 or 100Mbit)  
+      Ethernet (10 or 100Mbit)  --->
+         [*] Ethernet (10 or 100Mbit)
          &lt;*&gt;   the driver for your network card
 <comment>(Be sure to select &lt;*&gt; and not &lt;M&gt;)</comment>
 </pre>
@@ -708,7 +707,7 @@
 <pre caption="Configuring a 2.6.x series kernel to support DHCP">
 Device Drivers --->
    Networking Support --->
-      Networking options  
+      Networking options
          [*] TCP/IP networking--->
          [*]   IP: kernel level autoconfiguration
          [*]     IP: DHCP support
@@ -723,7 +722,7 @@
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Configuring the kernel to support SquashFS">
-File systems---> 
+File systems--->
    Miscellaneous filesystems --->
       [*] SquashFS 2.X - Squashed file system support
 </pre>
@@ -802,7 +801,7 @@
 
 <p>
 The netboot images will ask your DHCP server for an IP as well as a root-path
-parameter.  Both can be specified per host using a MAC address to identify
+parameter. Both can be specified per host using a MAC address to identify
 machines:
 </p>
 
@@ -858,7 +857,6 @@
 
 <chapter>
 <title>Conclusion</title>
-
 <section>
 <title>To Automate or not to Automate?</title>
 <body>



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