cam 05/09/04 23:18:51 Modified: xml/htdocs/doc/en genkernel.xml Log: Fixed typo in mount arguments order + some "international" style corrections.
Revision Changes Path 1.25 +28 -26 xml/htdocs/doc/en/genkernel.xml file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/genkernel.xml?rev=1.25&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/genkernel.xml?rev=1.25&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/genkernel.xml.diff?r1=1.24&r2=1.25&cvsroot=gentoo Index: genkernel.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/genkernel.xml,v retrieving revision 1.24 retrieving revision 1.25 diff -u -r1.24 -r1.25 --- genkernel.xml 4 Sep 2005 23:04:25 -0000 1.24 +++ genkernel.xml 4 Sep 2005 23:18:51 -0000 1.25 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?> -<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/genkernel.xml,v 1.24 2005/09/04 23:04:25 cam Exp $ --> +<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/genkernel.xml,v 1.25 2005/09/04 23:18:51 cam Exp $ --> <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd"> <guide link="/doc/en/genkernel.xml"> @@ -26,8 +26,8 @@ <license/> -<version>1.4.1</version> -<date>2005-08-11</date> +<version>1.4.2</version> +<date>2005-09-05</date> <chapter> <title>Introduction</title> @@ -179,7 +179,7 @@ command line. </li> <li> - <b>--<c>no-</c>save-config</b>: Saves [or does not save] the kernel + <b>--<c>no-</c>save-config</b>: Saves <e>[or does not save]</e> the kernel configuration to a file in the <path>/etc/kernels/</path> directory for later use. </li> @@ -328,9 +328,9 @@ (1) to the number of CPUs used by the system. So, for a system with one CPU, the appropriate flag is <c>-j2</c>; a system with two CPUs will use the <c>-j3</c> flag, and so on. <e>(A system with one processor that - supports Hyper-Threading⢠(HT) Technology can use the</e><c>-j3</c> - <e>flag, provided Symmetric Multi-Processing (SMP) support is enabled in - the kernel.)</e> + supports Hyper-Threading™ (HT) Technology can use the + </e><c>-j3</c><e> flag, provided Symmetric Multi-Processing (SMP) support is + enabled in the kernel.)</e> </li> </ul> @@ -360,8 +360,8 @@ <path>/var/log/genkernel.log</path> by default. </li> <li> - <b>--no-color</b>: Activates [or deactivates] colored output of debugging - information (reported by genkernel) using escape sequences. + <b>--no-color</b>: Activates <e>[or deactivates]</e> colored output of + debugging information (reported by genkernel) using escape sequences. </li> </ul> @@ -425,9 +425,9 @@ link="http://evms.sourceforge.net/";>Enterprise Volume Management System</uri> (EVMS2), if available. Be sure to install the evms package on your system with <c>USE=static emerge evms2</c> before using this - (genkernel) flag. <e>(Omitting the </e><c>USE=static</c> <e>flag during - package installation will fail to include the necessary static binaries.) - </e> + (genkernel) flag. <e>(Omitting the </e><c>USE=static</c><e> flag during + package installation will fail to include the necessary static + binaries.)</e> </li> <li> <b>--dmraid</b>: Includes support for <uri @@ -438,11 +438,11 @@ </li> <li> <b>--linuxrc=/path/to/your/linuxrc</b>: Specifies a user-created - <e>linuxrc</e> â a script that is initialized during the start-up stage of - the kernel, prior to the actual boot process. (A default linuxrc script - should be in the <path>/usr/share/genkernel/</path> directory.) This script - allows you to boot into a small, modularized kernel and load the drivers - that are needed (as modules) by the system. + <e>linuxrc</e> — a script that is initialized during the start-up + stage of the kernel, prior to the actual boot process. (A default linuxrc + script should be in the <path>/usr/share/genkernel/</path> directory.) This + script allows you to boot into a small, modularized kernel and load the + drivers that are needed (as modules) by the system. </li> <li> <b>--cachedir=/path/to/alt/dir/</b>: Overrides the default cache location @@ -500,7 +500,9 @@ <li><c>initrd</c>: Only builds the initrd image</li> <li><c>bzImage</c>: Only builds the kernel image</li> <li><c>kernel</c>: Only builds the kernel image and modules</li> - <li><c>all</c>: Builds all stages â the initrd, kernel image and modules.</li> + <li> + <c>all</c>: Builds all stages — the initrd, kernel image and modules. + </li> </ul> <p> @@ -586,7 +588,7 @@ kernel's source tree. Setting this option to 'no' creates a cascade effect — it is equivalent to genkernel's <c>--no-clean</c> flag, which disables the <c>make clean</c> command and implies genkernel's - <c>--no-mrproper</c> flag — essentially nullifying the <c>make + <c>--no-mrproper</c> flag — essentially nullifying the <c>make mrproper</c> command. </li> <li> @@ -619,10 +621,10 @@ </li> <li> <b>DEBUGLEVEL=<c>[0|1|2|3|4|5]</c></b>: This option is for adjusting the - verbosity of the output produced by genkernel â setting this option to '0' - with <c>--debuglevel=0</c> will suppress all output produced by genkernel; - setting this option to '5' with <c>--debuglevel=5</c> provides the user - with all output produced by genkernel. + verbosity of the output produced by genkernel — setting this option to + '0' with <c>--debuglevel=0</c> will suppress all output produced by + genkernel; setting this option to '5' with <c>--debuglevel=5</c> provides + the user with all output produced by genkernel. </li> </ul> @@ -700,7 +702,7 @@ and the <c>IP: DHCP support</c> options. This avoids an unnecessary layer of complexity since the IP address and the NFS path to the Installation CD can be configured on a DHCP server. Of course, this means the kernel command line -will remain constant for any machine â which is very important for +will remain constant for any machine — which is very important for <e>etherbooting</e>. </p> @@ -737,7 +739,7 @@ <pre caption="Creating a compressed tarball containing the kernel modules"> <comment>(Create a tar.gz containing all the modules)</comment> # <i>cd /</i> -# <i> tar -cf /tmp/modules-X.Y.Z.tar.gz /lib/modules/X.Y.Z/</i> +# <i>tar -cf /tmp/modules-X.Y.Z.tar.gz /lib/modules/X.Y.Z/</i> </pre> <p> @@ -784,7 +786,7 @@ <pre caption="Preparing the NFS share"> <comment>(This assumes that /nfs/livecd is a exported NFS share)</comment> -# <i>mount /mnt/cdrom /tmp/gentoo-livecd.iso -o loop</i> +# <i>mount /tmp/gentoo-livecd.iso /mnt/cdrom -o loop</i> # <i>cp -p /mnt/cdrom /nfs/livecd</i> # <i>umount /mnt/cdrom</i> -- [email protected] mailing list
