neysx       05/11/21 16:38:19

  Modified:    xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook hb-install-alpha-medium.xml
                        hb-install-amd64-medium.xml
                        hb-install-hppa-medium.xml
                        hb-install-ppc-medium.xml
                        hb-install-ppc64-medium.xml
                        hb-install-sparc-medium.xml
                        hb-install-x86-medium.xml
  Log:
  #112511 Chapter 2, minor grammatical error

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--- hb-install-alpha-medium.xml 11 Nov 2005 17:27:15 -0000      1.37
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@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/1.0 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: 
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+<!-- $Header: 
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 <sections>
 
@@ -176,12 +176,12 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-You might find a so-called Package CD on one of our mirrors. This CD is no
+You might find a Package CD on one of our mirrors. This CD is not an
 Installation CD but an additional resource that can be exploited during a
-networkless installation. It contains prebuilt packages (the so-called GRP set)
-that allows you to easily and quickly install additional applications (such as
-OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the networkless Gentoo
-installation.
+networkless installation. It contains prebuilt packages (also known as the GRP
+set) that allow you to easily and quickly install additional applications
+(such as OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the networkless
+Gentoo installation.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -230,8 +230,8 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Inside that directory you'll find so-called ISO-files. Those are full CD images
-which you can write on a CD-R.
+Inside that directory you'll find ISO-files. Those are full CD images which you
+can write on a CD-R.
 </p>
 
 <p>



1.40      +8 -8      xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-amd64-medium.xml

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--- hb-install-amd64-medium.xml 11 Nov 2005 17:27:15 -0000      1.39
+++ hb-install-amd64-medium.xml 21 Nov 2005 16:38:19 -0000      1.40
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: 
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1.39 2005/11/11 17:27:15 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: 
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1.40 2005/11/21 16:38:19 neysx Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
@@ -177,11 +177,11 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-You might find a so-called <e>Package CD</e> on one of our mirrors. This CD is
-no Installation CD but an additional resource that can be exploited during a 
-networkless installation. It contains prebuilt packages (the so-called GRP 
-set) that allows you to easily and quickly install additional applications
-(such as OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the networkless 
+You might find a <e>Package CD</e> on one of our mirrors. This CD is not an
+Installation CD but an additional resource that can be exploited during a
+networkless installation. It contains prebuilt packages (also known as the GRP
+set) that allow you to easily and quickly install additional applications
+(such as OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the networkless
 Gentoo installation.
 </p>
 
@@ -231,8 +231,8 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Inside that directory you'll find so-called ISO-files. Those are full CD images
-which you can write on a CD-R.
+Inside that directory you'll find ISO-files. Those are full CD images which you
+can write on a CD-R.
 </p>
 
 <p>



1.37      +8 -8      xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-hppa-medium.xml

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--- hb-install-hppa-medium.xml  15 Nov 2005 22:30:39 -0000      1.36
+++ hb-install-hppa-medium.xml  21 Nov 2005 16:38:19 -0000      1.37
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/1.0 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: 
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1.36 2005/11/15 22:30:39 neysx Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: 
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1.37 2005/11/21 16:38:19 neysx Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
@@ -173,11 +173,11 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-You might find a so-called <e>Package CD</e> on one of our mirrors. This CD is
-no Installation CD but an additional resource that can be exploited during a
-networkless installation. It contains prebuilt packages (the so-called GRP set)
-that allows you to easily and quickly install additional applications (such as
-OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the networkless Gentoo
+You might find a <e>Package CD</e> on one of our mirrors. This CD is not an
+Installation CD but an additional resource that can be exploited during a
+networkless installation. It contains prebuilt packages (also known as the GRP
+set) that allow you to easily and quickly install additional applications (such
+as OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the networkless Gentoo
 installation.
 </p>
 
@@ -227,8 +227,8 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Inside that directory you'll find so-called ISO-files. Those are full CD images
-which you can write on a CD-R.
+Inside that directory you'll find ISO-files. Those are full CD images which you
+can write on a CD-R.
 </p>
 
 <p>



1.50      +9 -9      xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-ppc-medium.xml

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--- hb-install-ppc-medium.xml   11 Nov 2005 17:27:15 -0000      1.49
+++ hb-install-ppc-medium.xml   21 Nov 2005 16:38:19 -0000      1.50
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: 
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2005/11/11 17:27:15 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: 
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2005/11/21 16:38:19 neysx Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
@@ -198,12 +198,12 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-You might find a so-called <e>Package CD</e> on one of our mirrors. This CD is
-no Installation CD but an additional resource that can be exploited during a 
-networkless installation. It contains prebuilt packages (the so-called GRP 
-set) that allows you to easily and quickly install additional applications 
-(such as OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the networkless
-Gentoo installation.
+You might find a <e>Package CD</e> on one of our mirrors. This CD is not an
+Installation CD but an additional resource that can be exploited during a
+networkless installation. It contains prebuilt packages (also known as the GRP
+set) that allow you to easily and quickly install additional applications (such
+as OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the networkless Gentoo
+installation.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -252,8 +252,8 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Inside that directory you'll find so-called ISO-files. Those are full CD images
-which you can write on a CD-R.
+Inside that directory you'll find ISO-files. Those are full CD images which you
+can write on a CD-R.
 </p>
 
 <p>



1.26      +2 -2      xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-ppc64-medium.xml

file : 
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--- hb-install-ppc64-medium.xml 11 Nov 2005 17:27:15 -0000      1.25
+++ hb-install-ppc64-medium.xml 21 Nov 2005 16:38:19 -0000      1.26
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/1.0 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: 
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1.25 2005/11/11 17:27:15 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: 
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1.26 2005/11/21 16:38:19 neysx Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Inside that directory you'll find so-called ISO-files. Those are full CD images
+Inside that directory you'll find ISO-files. Those are full CD images
 which you can write on a CD-R.
 </p>
 



1.37      +9 -9      xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-sparc-medium.xml

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===================================================================
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retrieving revision 1.36
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--- hb-install-sparc-medium.xml 11 Nov 2005 17:27:15 -0000      1.36
+++ hb-install-sparc-medium.xml 21 Nov 2005 16:38:19 -0000      1.37
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/1.0 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: 
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1.36 2005/11/11 17:27:15 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: 
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1.37 2005/11/21 16:38:19 neysx Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
@@ -189,12 +189,12 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-You might find a so-called <e>Package CD</e> on one of our mirrors. This CD is
-no Installation CD but an additional resource that can be exploited during a 
-networkless installation. It contains prebuilt packages (the so-called GRP set)
-that allows you to easily and quickly install additional applications (such as
-OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the networkless Gentoo 
-installation.
+You might find a <e>Package CD</e> on one of our mirrors. This CD is not an
+Installation CD but an additional resource that can be exploited during a
+networkless installation. It contains prebuilt packages (also known as the GRP
+set) that allow you to easily and quickly install additional applications
+(such as OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the networkless
+Gentoo installation.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -243,8 +243,8 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Inside that directory you'll find so-called ISO-files. Those are full CD images
-which you can write on a CD-R.
+Inside that directory you'll find ISO-files. Those are full CD images which you
+can write on a CD-R.
 </p>
 
 <p>



1.42      +8 -8      xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-x86-medium.xml

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===================================================================
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--- hb-install-x86-medium.xml   11 Nov 2005 17:27:15 -0000      1.41
+++ hb-install-x86-medium.xml   21 Nov 2005 16:38:19 -0000      1.42
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-x86-medium.xml,v 1.41 
2005/11/11 17:27:15 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: 
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2005/11/21 16:38:19 neysx Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
@@ -171,11 +171,11 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-You might find a so-called <e>Package CD</e> on one of our mirrors. This CD is
-no Installation CD but an additional resource that can be exploited during a 
-networkless installation. It contains prebuilt packages (the so-called GRP set)
-that allows you to easily and quickly install additional applications (such as
-OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the networkless Gentoo 
+You might find a <e>Package CD</e> on one of our mirrors. This CD is not an
+Installation CD but an additional resource that can be exploited during a
+networkless installation. It contains prebuilt packages (also known as the GRP
+set) that allow you to easily and quickly install additional applications (such
+as OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the networkless Gentoo
 installation.
 </p>
 
@@ -225,8 +225,8 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Inside that directory you'll find so-called ISO-files. Those are full CD images
-which you can write on a CD-R.
+Inside that directory you'll find ISO-files. Those are full CD images which you
+can write on a CD-R.
 </p>
 
 <p>



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