neysx       05/11/21 16:38:21

  Modified:    xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2005.1
                        hb-install-alpha-medium.xml
                        hb-install-amd64-medium.xml
                        hb-install-hppa-medium.xml
                        hb-install-ppc-medium.xml
                        hb-install-ppc64-medium.xml
                        hb-install-sparc-medium.xml
                        hb-install-x86-medium.xml
  Log:
  #112511 Chapter 2, minor grammatical error

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 <sections>
 
@@ -108,12 +108,12 @@
 </ul>
 
 <p>
-Gentoo also provides a Package CD. This is no Installation CD but an 
additional 
-resource that you can exploit during the installation of your Gentoo system. It
-contains prebuilt packages (the so-called GRP set) that allows you to easily 
-and quickly install additional applications (such as OpenOffice.org, KDE, 
-GNOME, ...) immediately after the Gentoo installation and right before you 
-update your Portage tree.
+Gentoo also provides a Package CD. This is not an Installation CD but an
+additional resource that you can exploit during the installation of your Gentoo
+system. It contains prebuilt packages (also known as the GRP set) that allow
+you to easily and quickly install additional applications (such as
+OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the Gentoo installation and
+right before you update your Portage tree.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -140,8 +140,8 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Inside those directories you'll find so-called ISO-files. Those are full CD 
-images which you can write on a CD-R.
+Inside those directories you'll find ISO-files. Those are full CD images which
+you can write on a CD-R.
 </p>
 
 <p>



1.4       +9 -9      
xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2005.1/hb-install-amd64-medium.xml

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-<!-- $Header: 
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+<!-- $Header: 
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 <sections>
 
@@ -108,12 +108,12 @@
 </ul>
 
 <p>
-Gentoo also provides a Package CD. This is no Installation CD but an 
additional 
-resource that you can exploit during the installation of your Gentoo system. It
-contains prebuilt packages (the so-called GRP set) that allows you to easily 
-and quickly install additional applications (such as OpenOffice.org, KDE, 
-GNOME, ...) immediately after the Gentoo installation and right before you 
-update your Portage tree.
+Gentoo also provides a Package CD. This is not an Installation CD but an
+additional resource that you can exploit during the installation of your Gentoo
+system. It contains prebuilt packages (also known as the GRP set) that allow
+you to easily and quickly install additional applications (such as
+OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the Gentoo installation and
+right before you update your Portage tree.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -140,8 +140,8 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Inside those directories you'll find so-called ISO-files. Those are full CD 
-images which you can write on a CD-R.
+Inside those directories you'll find ISO-files. Those are full CD images which
+you can write on a CD-R.
 </p>
 
 <p>



1.4       +3 -3      
xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2005.1/hb-install-hppa-medium.xml

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@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/1.0 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: 
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+<!-- $Header: 
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 <sections>
 
@@ -122,8 +122,8 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Inside those directories you'll find so-called ISO-files. Those are full CD 
-images which you can write on a CD-R.
+Inside those directories you'll find ISO-files. Those are full CD images which
+you can write on a CD-R.
 </p>
 
 <p>



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--- hb-install-ppc-medium.xml   11 Nov 2005 17:27:16 -0000      1.4
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@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: 
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+<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2005.1/hb-install-ppc-medium.xml,v
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 <sections>
 
@@ -131,12 +131,12 @@
 </ul>
 
 <p>
-Gentoo also provides a Package CD. This is no Installation CD but an 
additional 
-resource that you can exploit during the installation of your Gentoo system. It
-contains prebuilt packages (the so-called GRP set) that allows you to easily 
-and quickly install additional applications (such as OpenOffice.org, KDE, 
-GNOME, ...) immediately after the Gentoo installation and right before you 
-update your Portage tree.
+Gentoo also provides a Package CD. This is not an Installation CD but an
+additional resource that you can exploit during the installation of your Gentoo
+system. It contains prebuilt packages (also known as the GRP set) that allow
+you to easily and quickly install additional applications (such as
+OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the Gentoo installation and
+right before you update your Portage tree.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -163,8 +163,8 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Inside those directories you'll find so-called ISO-files. Those are full CD 
-images which you can write on a CD-R.
+Inside those directories you'll find ISO-files. Those are full CD images which
+you can write on a CD-R.
 </p>
 
 <p>



1.5       +8 -8      
xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2005.1/hb-install-ppc64-medium.xml

file : 
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@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2005.1/hb-install-ppc64-medium.xml,v
 1.4 2005/11/11 17:27:16 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2005.1/hb-install-ppc64-medium.xml,v
 1.5 2005/11/21 16:38:20 neysx Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
@@ -114,11 +114,11 @@
 </ul>
 
 <p>
-Gentoo also provides a Package CD. This is no Installation CD but an additional
-resource that you can exploit during the installation of your Gentoo system. It
-contains prebuilt packages (the so-called GRP set) that allows you to easily
-and quickly install additional applications immediately after the Gentoo 
-installation and right before you update your Portage tree.
+Gentoo also provides a Package CD. This is not an Installation CD but an
+additional resource that you can exploit during the installation of your Gentoo
+system. It contains prebuilt packages (also known as the GRP set) that allow
+you to easily and quickly install additional applications immediately after the
+Gentoo installation and right before you update your Portage tree.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -145,8 +145,8 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Inside those directories you'll find so-called ISO-files. Those are full CD 
-images which you can write on a CD-R.
+Inside those directories you'll find ISO-files. Those are full CD images which
+you can write on a CD-R.
 </p>
 
 <p>



1.5       +9 -9      
xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2005.1/hb-install-sparc-medium.xml

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Index: hb-install-sparc-medium.xml
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--- hb-install-sparc-medium.xml 11 Nov 2005 17:27:16 -0000      1.4
+++ hb-install-sparc-medium.xml 21 Nov 2005 16:38:20 -0000      1.5
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: 
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 1.4 2005/11/11 17:27:16 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2005.1/hb-install-sparc-medium.xml,v
 1.5 2005/11/21 16:38:20 neysx Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
@@ -121,12 +121,12 @@
 </ul>
 
 <p>
-Gentoo also provides a Package CD. This is no Installation CD but an 
additional 
-resource that you can exploit during the installation of your Gentoo system. It
-contains prebuilt packages (the so-called GRP set) that allows you to easily 
-and quickly install additional applications (such as OpenOffice.org, KDE, 
-GNOME, ...) immediately after the Gentoo installation and right before you 
-update your Portage tree.
+Gentoo also provides a Package CD. This is not an Installation CD but an
+additional resource that you can exploit during the installation of your Gentoo
+system. It contains prebuilt packages (also known as the GRP set) that allow
+you to easily and quickly install additional applications (such as
+OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the Gentoo installation and
+right before you update your Portage tree.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -153,8 +153,8 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Inside those directories you'll find so-called ISO-files. 
-Those are full CD images which you can write on a CD-R.
+Inside those directories you'll find ISO-files. Those are full CD images which
+you can write on a CD-R.
 </p>
 
 <p>



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file : 
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Index: hb-install-x86-medium.xml
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@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2005.1/hb-install-x86-medium.xml,v
 1.5 2005/11/12 15:16:24 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2005.1/hb-install-x86-medium.xml,v
 1.6 2005/11/21 16:38:20 neysx Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
@@ -104,12 +104,12 @@
 </ul>
 
 <p>
-Gentoo also provides a Package CD. This is no Installation CD but an 
additional 
-resource that you can exploit during the installation of your Gentoo system. It
-contains prebuilt packages (the so-called GRP set) that allows you to easily 
-and quickly install additional applications (such as OpenOffice.org, KDE, 
-GNOME, ...) immediately after the Gentoo installation and right before you 
-update your Portage tree.
+Gentoo also provides a Package CD. This is not an Installation CD but an
+additional resource that you can exploit during the installation of your Gentoo
+system. It contains prebuilt packages (also known as the GRP set) that allow
+you to easily and quickly install additional applications (such as
+OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the Gentoo installation and
+right before you update your Portage tree.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -141,8 +141,8 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Inside those directories you'll find so-called ISO-files. Those are full CD 
-images which you can write on a CD-R.
+Inside those directories you'll find ISO-files. Those are full CD images which
+you can write on a CD-R.
 </p>
 
 <p>



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