Stefan Sperling has posted comments on this change. ( 
https://gerrit.osmocom.org/11836 )

Change subject: chapters/gsup.adoc: document MO-/MT-forwardSM messages
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Patch Set 5:

(3 comments)

https://gerrit.osmocom.org/#/c/11836/5/common/chapters/gsup.adoc
File common/chapters/gsup.adoc:

https://gerrit.osmocom.org/#/c/11836/5/common/chapters/gsup.adoc@1093
PS5, Line 1093: relay sub-layer protocol. It can be either of the following:
"Either" implies that there are only two options.
Since there are three options listed below, this should say "any of the 
following" instead of "either of the following".


https://gerrit.osmocom.org/#/c/11836/5/common/chapters/gsup.adoc@1106
PS5, Line 1106: relay sub-layer protocol. It can be either of the following:
Here, "either" is fine :)


https://gerrit.osmocom.org/#/c/11836/5/common/chapters/gsup.adoc@1168
PS5, Line 1168: should keep RAN the connection open. See 3GPP TS 29.002, 
section 7.6.8.7.
I'm having trouble understanding this part:
"the network should keep RAN the connection open"

Did you mean to write "the network should keep the RAN connection open" 
instead? Or something else?



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