Avoid confusion in compound sentence about the start of the commit set and the depth measure. Use two sentences.
Signed-off-by: Philip Oakley <philipoak...@iee.org> diff --git a/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt b/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt index 49cdc57..fa4acab 100644 --- a/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt +++ b/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt @@ -258,9 +258,11 @@ a positive depth, this step is skipped. unshallow-line = PKT-LINE("unshallow" SP obj-id) ---- -If the client has requested a positive depth, the server will compute -the set of commits which are no deeper than the desired depth, starting -at the client's wants. The server writes 'shallow' lines for each +If the client has requested a positive depth the server will compute +the set of commits which are no deeper than the desired depth. The set +of commits start at the client's wants. + +The server writes 'shallow' lines for each commit whose parents will not be sent as a result. The server writes an 'unshallow' line for each commit which the client has indicated is shallow, but is no longer shallow at the currently requested depth -- 1.7.8.msysgit.0 -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in the body of a message to majord...@vger.kernel.org More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html