Philip Oakley <philipoak...@iee.org> writes: > Avoid confusion in compound sentence about the start of the commit set > and the depth measure. Use two sentences.
Dropping the first ',' after "positive depth" does not seem to make it any easier to read (I personally think it makes it a lot harder to read). Splitting the tail-end of the sentence into a separate sentence does make it easier to read, though. > > Signed-off-by: Philip Oakley <philipoak...@iee.org> > > diff --git a/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt > b/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt > index 49cdc57..fa4acab 100644 > --- a/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt > +++ b/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt > @@ -258,9 +258,11 @@ a positive depth, this step is skipped. > unshallow-line = PKT-LINE("unshallow" SP obj-id) > ---- > > -If the client has requested a positive depth, the server will compute > -the set of commits which are no deeper than the desired depth, starting > -at the client's wants. The server writes 'shallow' lines for each > +If the client has requested a positive depth the server will compute > +the set of commits which are no deeper than the desired depth. The set > +of commits start at the client's wants. > + > +The server writes 'shallow' lines for each > commit whose parents will not be sent as a result. The server writes > an 'unshallow' line for each commit which the client has indicated is > shallow, but is no longer shallow at the currently requested depth -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in the body of a message to majord...@vger.kernel.org More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html