Philip Oakley <philipoak...@iee.org> writes:
> Avoid confusion in compound sentence about the start of the commit set
> and the depth measure. Use two sentences.
Dropping the first ',' after "positive depth" does not seem to make
it any easier to read (I personally think it makes it a lot harder
to read). Splitting the tail-end of the sentence into a separate
sentence does make it easier to read, though.
>
> Signed-off-by: Philip Oakley <philipoak...@iee.org>
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt
> b/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt
> index 49cdc57..fa4acab 100644
> --- a/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt
> +++ b/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt
> @@ -258,9 +258,11 @@ a positive depth, this step is skipped.
> unshallow-line = PKT-LINE("unshallow" SP obj-id)
> ----
>
> -If the client has requested a positive depth, the server will compute
> -the set of commits which are no deeper than the desired depth, starting
> -at the client's wants. The server writes 'shallow' lines for each
> +If the client has requested a positive depth the server will compute
> +the set of commits which are no deeper than the desired depth. The set
> +of commits start at the client's wants.
> +
> +The server writes 'shallow' lines for each
> commit whose parents will not be sent as a result. The server writes
> an 'unshallow' line for each commit which the client has indicated is
> shallow, but is no longer shallow at the currently requested depth
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