On Thursday 14 September 2017 01:06 PM, Michael J Gruber wrote:
Kaartic Sivaraam venit, vidit, dixit 13.09.2017 15:05:
  void wt_status_add_cut_line(FILE *fp)
  {
-       const char *explanation = _("Do not touch the line above.\nEverything below 
will be removed.");
+       const char *explanation = _("Do not modify or remove the line 
above.\nEverything below will be removed.");
I don't want to complicate things. But now - due to the repeated usage
of "remove" - these two sentences seem to be connected by an invisible
"or else" ("will" vs. "would" not withstanding). i.e. "or else
everything below will be removed, too", which is wrong. Before, they
were separated more clearly.

At least I don't think they are connected by an invisible "or else" because
they appear on different lines,

   #

   # ------------------------ >8 ------------------------

   # Do not modify or remove the line above.

   # Everything below will be removed.

   diff --git a/hook-checks/hooks/applypatch-msg 
b/hook-checks/hooks/applypatch-msg

   new file mode 100755

   index 0000000..a5d7b84

   --- /dev/null

   +++ b/hook-checks/hooks/applypatch-msg

Also, given all the translations that we have, it seems somewhat strange
to try and foresee and workaround possible misunderstandings of commonly
used English phrases.
I thought the translators wouldn't mind this! If they do, then it's better to drop
this patch.

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Kaartic

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