> > -Or you can use linkgit:git-name-rev, which will give the commit a
> > +or you can use linkgit:git-name-rev, which will give the commit a
> I think this reads better with a capital 'O'. (The pedant in me
> likes it, too, since a colon ends a sentence.)
> The lowercase 'but' later in this section should perhaps also be
> capitalized, since it also starts an independent thought.
> But that may sometimes help you guess which tags come after the
> given commit.
I am no native speaker, but I am a little reluctant to start a new sentence
with "But" or "Or".
> The sentence "So, you can run something like ... then search for a
> line that looks like ..." is a sequence of incomplete thoughts. It
> could be paraphrased a little to scan better:
> So, if you run something like "git show-branch e05db0fd
> v1.5.0-rc0 v1.5.0-rc1 v1.5.0-rc2"
> $ git show-branch e05db0fd v1.5.0-rc0 v1.5.0-rc1 v1.5.0-rc2
> ! [e05db...
> then a line like
> + ++ [e05db0fd] Fix warnings in ...
> shows that e05db0fd is reachable from itself, from v1.5.0-rc1,
> and from v1.5.0-rc2, and not from v1.5.0-rc0.
OK; thanks! I will add this.
> > -To see how submodule support works, create (for example) four example
> > +To see how submodule support works, create four example
> I'd keep the joke.
I totally missed the joke ...
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