scwhittle commented on code in PR #28835:
URL: https://github.com/apache/beam/pull/28835#discussion_r1407765655


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runners/google-cloud-dataflow-java/worker/src/test/java/org/apache/beam/runners/dataflow/worker/windmill/client/grpc/StreamingEngineClientTest.java:
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@@ -196,8 +196,7 @@ public void testStreamsStartCorrectly() throws 
InterruptedException {
     String workerToken = "workerToken1";
     String workerToken2 = "workerToken2";
 
-    Thread streamingEngineClientThread =
-        new Thread(streamingEngineClient::waitForFirstWorkerMetadata);
+    Thread streamingEngineClientThread = new 
Thread(this::waitForFirstWorkerMetadata);

Review Comment:
   can this thread be removed? You aren't joining it and now the wait itself 
doesn't trigger anything, so it seems like it is unnecessary.
   
   ditto for the others, perhaps the waitForFirstWorkerMetadata can just be 
removed by relying on getWorkerMetadtadaReady instead



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runners/google-cloud-dataflow-java/worker/src/test/java/org/apache/beam/runners/dataflow/worker/windmill/client/grpc/StreamingEngineClientTest.java:
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@@ -480,6 +366,10 @@ private StreamingEngineConnectionState 
waitForWorkerMetadataToBeConsumed(
     return connections.get();
   }
 
+  private void waitForFirstWorkerMetadata() {
+    while 
(!Preconditions.checkNotNull(streamingEngineClient).isWorkerMetadataReady()) {}

Review Comment:
   This should have some sleep so it's not busy spinning cpu now that it just 
polls without waiting.
   
   But see above, perhaps this can just be removed?



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runners/google-cloud-dataflow-java/worker/src/main/java/org/apache/beam/runners/dataflow/worker/windmill/client/grpc/GrpcDirectGetWorkStream.java:
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@@ -0,0 +1,328 @@
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+package org.apache.beam.runners.dataflow.worker.windmill.client.grpc;
+
+import com.google.auto.value.AutoValue;
+import java.io.IOException;
+import java.io.PrintWriter;
+import java.util.Set;
+import java.util.concurrent.ConcurrentHashMap;
+import java.util.concurrent.ConcurrentMap;
+import java.util.concurrent.atomic.AtomicReference;
+import java.util.function.Function;
+import java.util.function.Supplier;
+import javax.annotation.Nullable;
+import org.apache.beam.runners.dataflow.worker.WindmillTimeUtils;
+import org.apache.beam.runners.dataflow.worker.windmill.Windmill;
+import 
org.apache.beam.runners.dataflow.worker.windmill.Windmill.ComputationWorkItemMetadata;
+import 
org.apache.beam.runners.dataflow.worker.windmill.Windmill.GetWorkRequest;
+import 
org.apache.beam.runners.dataflow.worker.windmill.Windmill.StreamingGetWorkRequest;
+import 
org.apache.beam.runners.dataflow.worker.windmill.Windmill.StreamingGetWorkResponseChunk;
+import org.apache.beam.runners.dataflow.worker.windmill.Windmill.WorkItem;
+import 
org.apache.beam.runners.dataflow.worker.windmill.client.AbstractWindmillStream;
+import 
org.apache.beam.runners.dataflow.worker.windmill.client.WindmillStream.GetWorkStream;
+import 
org.apache.beam.runners.dataflow.worker.windmill.client.grpc.observers.StreamObserverFactory;
+import 
org.apache.beam.runners.dataflow.worker.windmill.client.throttling.ThrottleTimer;
+import 
org.apache.beam.runners.dataflow.worker.windmill.work.ProcessWorkItemClient;
+import org.apache.beam.runners.dataflow.worker.windmill.work.WorkItemProcessor;
+import 
org.apache.beam.runners.dataflow.worker.windmill.work.budget.GetWorkBudget;
+import org.apache.beam.sdk.annotations.Internal;
+import org.apache.beam.sdk.util.BackOff;
+import org.apache.beam.vendor.grpc.v1p54p0.com.google.protobuf.ByteString;
+import org.apache.beam.vendor.grpc.v1p54p0.io.grpc.stub.StreamObserver;
+import 
org.apache.beam.vendor.guava.v32_1_2_jre.com.google.common.base.Preconditions;
+import 
org.apache.beam.vendor.guava.v32_1_2_jre.com.google.common.base.Suppliers;
+import org.joda.time.Instant;
+import org.slf4j.Logger;
+import org.slf4j.LoggerFactory;
+
+/**
+ * Implementation of {@link GetWorkStream} that passes along a specific {@link
+ * 
org.apache.beam.runners.dataflow.worker.windmill.client.WindmillStream.GetDataStream}
 and {@link
+ * 
org.apache.beam.runners.dataflow.worker.windmill.client.WindmillStream.CommitWorkStream}
 to the
+ * processing context {@link ProcessWorkItemClient}. During the work item 
processing lifecycle,
+ * these direct streams are used to facilitate these RPC calls to specific 
backend workers.
+ */
+@Internal
+public final class GrpcDirectGetWorkStream
+    extends AbstractWindmillStream<StreamingGetWorkRequest, 
StreamingGetWorkResponseChunk>
+    implements GetWorkStream {
+  private static final Logger LOG = 
LoggerFactory.getLogger(GrpcDirectGetWorkStream.class);
+  private static final StreamingGetWorkRequest HEALTH_CHECK_REQUEST =
+      StreamingGetWorkRequest.newBuilder()
+          .setRequestExtension(
+              Windmill.StreamingGetWorkRequestExtension.newBuilder()
+                  .setMaxItems(0)
+                  .setMaxBytes(0)
+                  .build())
+          .build();
+
+  private final GetWorkRequest request;
+  private final WorkItemProcessor workItemProcessorFn;
+  private final ThrottleTimer getWorkThrottleTimer;
+  private final Supplier<GetDataStream> getDataStream;
+  private final Supplier<CommitWorkStream> commitWorkStream;
+  /**
+   * Map of stream IDs to their buffers. Used to aggregate streaming gRPC 
response chunks as they
+   * come in. Once all chunks for a response has been received, the chunk is 
processed and the
+   * buffer is cleared.
+   */
+  private final ConcurrentMap<Long, WorkItemBuffer> workItemBuffers;
+
+  private final AtomicReference<GetWorkBudget> inflightBudget;
+  private final AtomicReference<GetWorkBudget> nextBudgetAdjustment;
+  private final AtomicReference<GetWorkBudget> pendingResponseBudget;
+
+  private GrpcDirectGetWorkStream(
+      Function<
+              StreamObserver<StreamingGetWorkResponseChunk>,
+              StreamObserver<StreamingGetWorkRequest>>
+          startGetWorkRpcFn,
+      GetWorkRequest request,
+      BackOff backoff,
+      StreamObserverFactory streamObserverFactory,
+      Set<AbstractWindmillStream<?, ?>> streamRegistry,
+      int logEveryNStreamFailures,
+      ThrottleTimer getWorkThrottleTimer,
+      Supplier<GetDataStream> getDataStream,
+      Supplier<CommitWorkStream> commitWorkStream,
+      WorkItemProcessor workItemProcessorFn) {
+    super(
+        startGetWorkRpcFn, backoff, streamObserverFactory, streamRegistry, 
logEveryNStreamFailures);
+    this.request = request;
+    this.getWorkThrottleTimer = getWorkThrottleTimer;
+    this.workItemProcessorFn = workItemProcessorFn;
+    this.workItemBuffers = new ConcurrentHashMap<>();
+    // Use the same GetDataStream and CommitWorkStream instances to process 
all the work in this
+    // stream.
+    this.getDataStream = Suppliers.memoize(getDataStream::get);
+    this.commitWorkStream = Suppliers.memoize(commitWorkStream::get);
+
+    this.inflightBudget = new AtomicReference<>(GetWorkBudget.noBudget());
+    this.nextBudgetAdjustment = new 
AtomicReference<>(GetWorkBudget.noBudget());
+    this.pendingResponseBudget = new 
AtomicReference<>(GetWorkBudget.noBudget());
+  }
+
+  public static GrpcDirectGetWorkStream create(
+      Function<
+              StreamObserver<StreamingGetWorkResponseChunk>,
+              StreamObserver<StreamingGetWorkRequest>>
+          startGetWorkRpcFn,
+      GetWorkRequest request,
+      BackOff backoff,
+      StreamObserverFactory streamObserverFactory,
+      Set<AbstractWindmillStream<?, ?>> streamRegistry,
+      int logEveryNStreamFailures,
+      ThrottleTimer getWorkThrottleTimer,
+      Supplier<GetDataStream> getDataStream,
+      Supplier<CommitWorkStream> commitWorkStream,
+      WorkItemProcessor workItemProcessorFn) {
+    GrpcDirectGetWorkStream getWorkStream =
+        new GrpcDirectGetWorkStream(
+            startGetWorkRpcFn,
+            request,
+            backoff,
+            streamObserverFactory,
+            streamRegistry,
+            logEveryNStreamFailures,
+            getWorkThrottleTimer,
+            getDataStream,
+            commitWorkStream,
+            workItemProcessorFn);
+    getWorkStream.startStream();
+    return getWorkStream;
+  }
+
+  private synchronized GetWorkBudget getThenResetBudgetAdjustment() {
+    return nextBudgetAdjustment.getAndUpdate(unused -> 
GetWorkBudget.noBudget());
+  }
+
+  private void sendRequestExtension() {
+    // Just sent the request extension, reset the nextBudgetAdjustment. This 
will be set when
+    // adjustBudget is called.
+    GetWorkBudget adjustment = getThenResetBudgetAdjustment();
+    StreamingGetWorkRequest extension =
+        StreamingGetWorkRequest.newBuilder()
+            .setRequestExtension(
+                Windmill.StreamingGetWorkRequestExtension.newBuilder()
+                    .setMaxItems(adjustment.items())
+                    .setMaxBytes(adjustment.bytes()))
+            .build();
+
+    executor()
+        .execute(
+            () -> {
+              try {
+                send(extension);
+              } catch (IllegalStateException e) {
+                // Stream was closed.
+              }
+            });
+  }
+
+  @Override
+  protected synchronized void onNewStream() {
+    workItemBuffers.clear();
+    // Add the current inflight budget to the next adjustment. Only positive 
values are allowed here
+    // with negatives defaulting to 0, since GetWorkBudgets cannot be created 
with negative values.
+    GetWorkBudget budgetAdjustment = 
nextBudgetAdjustment.get().apply(inflightBudget.get());
+    inflightBudget.set(budgetAdjustment);
+    send(
+        StreamingGetWorkRequest.newBuilder()
+            .setRequest(
+                request
+                    .toBuilder()
+                    .setMaxBytes(budgetAdjustment.bytes())
+                    .setMaxItems(budgetAdjustment.items()))
+            .build());
+
+    // We just sent the budget, reset it.
+    nextBudgetAdjustment.set(GetWorkBudget.noBudget());
+  }
+
+  @Override
+  protected boolean hasPendingRequests() {
+    return false;
+  }
+
+  @Override
+  public void appendSpecificHtml(PrintWriter writer) {
+    // Number of buffers is same as distinct workers that sent work on this 
stream.
+    writer.format(
+        "GetWorkStream: %d buffers, %s inflight budget allowed.",
+        workItemBuffers.size(), inflightBudget.get());
+  }
+
+  @Override
+  public void sendHealthCheck() {
+    send(HEALTH_CHECK_REQUEST);
+  }
+
+  @Override
+  protected void onResponse(StreamingGetWorkResponseChunk chunk) {
+    getWorkThrottleTimer.stop();
+    WorkItemBuffer workItemBuffer =
+        workItemBuffers.computeIfAbsent(chunk.getStreamId(), unused -> new 
WorkItemBuffer());
+    workItemBuffer.append(chunk);
+
+    // The entire WorkItem has been received, it is ready to be processed.
+    if (chunk.getRemainingBytesForWorkItem() == 0) {
+      workItemBuffer.runAndReset();
+      // Record the fact that there are now fewer outstanding messages and 
bytes on the stream.
+      inflightBudget.updateAndGet(budget -> budget.subtract(1, 
workItemBuffer.bufferedSize()));
+    }
+  }
+
+  @Override
+  protected void startThrottleTimer() {
+    getWorkThrottleTimer.start();
+  }
+
+  @Override
+  public synchronized void adjustBudget(long itemsDelta, long bytesDelta) {
+    nextBudgetAdjustment.set(nextBudgetAdjustment.get().apply(itemsDelta, 
bytesDelta));
+    sendRequestExtension();
+  }
+
+  @Override
+  public GetWorkBudget remainingBudget() {
+    // Snapshot the current budgets.
+    GetWorkBudget currentPendingResponseBudget = pendingResponseBudget.get();
+    GetWorkBudget currentNextBudgetAdjustment = nextBudgetAdjustment.get();
+    GetWorkBudget currentInflightBudget = inflightBudget.get();
+
+    return GetWorkBudget.builder()

Review Comment:
   Think you could simplify as
   
currentPendingResponseBudget.apply(currentNextBudgetAdjustment).apply(currentInflightBudget)



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